Reviews for Sunrise, Sunset
Lt.Gungirl chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Interesting story, I enjoyed most of it. I just felt that the moment when Roy had no idea who his daughter was dating didn't fit with how you wrote the rest of the story. I mean, he seems such a family man, and then he doesn't know who his daughter is in love with? I just think that it was a bit of a weak point in the story...But still good job besides that.

The dialogue was good, very realistic, very funny, and the best was the Roy vs Ed quips. Those were excellent.
bashfulglowfly chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
A big HUGE Gigantic "AWWWWW!"

Great story!