|Reviews for Sunrise, Sunset|
| Lt.Gungirl chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Interesting story, I enjoyed most of it. I just felt that the moment when Roy had no idea who his daughter was dating didn't fit with how you wrote the rest of the story. I mean, he seems such a family man, and then he doesn't know who his daughter is in love with? I just think that it was a bit of a weak point in the story...But still good job besides that.
The dialogue was good, very realistic, very funny, and the best was the Roy vs Ed quips. Those were excellent.
| bashfulglowfly chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
A big HUGE Gigantic "AWWWWW!"