Reviews for Drowning
Knight Ormeasco chapter 7 . 3/26
Mm, having read everything here up to this point, I can only really say these few things:

I dislike Drakath and would like to punch him in the eye. Repeatedly.
I don't care for shipping.

But I like both him and his relationship with Ty, here. I really like how you characterize Drakath; even though it's pretty obviously different from canon (as I see it), the way you root his character with his canon backstory and motivations makes the changes both believable and understandable, in turn, doing what probably constitutes a minor miracle and making a likable Drakath who's still believably... Drakath. Seriously, wow.

Also, I really like how he interacts with Ty here. Truth be told, I'm unsure of whether or not I would've found him as likable as I did if he hadn't had Ty around to constantly keep him on his toes. How she's always keeping him off-balance is just a thing of beauty and I really do like seeing how their personalities work off of each other. Great job!
happy anon chapter 7 . 3/23
You're back! Our savior is back and you've changed so much. For the better I might add! Ty and Drakath have such good chemistry, it tickles the heart. You kept Drakath his canon butthead self but the depth adds so much more and Ty is a hilarious, definitely morally ambiguous, and a character that's refreshing to see shining as the Hero. Do please continue! At your own pace of course. I will most definitely wait!
Anon chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Hi, you're the best! Has anyone ever told you that? I love these one-shots and it would be amazing if you could write a one-shot about the first kiss AND Drakath telling Ty his real name? Please? PLEASE?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2014

Also, lovely writing! I love these prompts so much!
Artimisa chapter 6 . 7/18/2014
I love Ty! She is so awesome and funny! D I have not came across a OC as good as Ty in a very long time. I love her personality and how her and Drakath's relationship is. Please update DE and Drowning soon! D
GreenyGrounds chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
I've read lots of OC stories and consider most of them to be all Mary Sues... However, YOURS! I can't find an MS characteristic anywhere. Heck, I even like your OC, Ty!
Lana chapter 6 . 3/24/2014
Thanks to your writing, I literally cannot imagine Drakath with anyone else. I am so glad I tlaked about the kids!
Kaiban chapter 6 . 3/23/2014
THIS WAS HONEST TO GOD WONDERFUL! lololol i love how Drakaths kids hate him! It was so funny, from Tylers faking his death to the poor bastard that stepped on Dravira's (Ashe's?) Toe hahahaha but my favorite line was probably the Drakath/Ty/Mirror threesome one haha it put Drakath narccisim (spell check please lol) in a whole new perspective haha i also like how each kid is just as creul as their father and just as powerful as their mother haha thats a VERY fearsome combination in Lore (anywhere really) if i do say so myself haha but forreal, i highly enjoyed this chapter and im looking forward to the future ones :D
Lana chapter 5 . 3/21/2014
Hey hey! It's been a while since I've reviewed but you're still going strong. I love these two so sos so sos os sososos much (and I usually don't like OC fics). This chapter was way too cute for words it's weird! Like it's still in character and very good but still works with all the crazy fluff. Now I wanna see what their kids might be like. Crazy little freaks probably.
Kaiban chapter 5 . 3/2/2014
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY NEW CHAP! Lol now that im back and getting updates again ill try not to miss any new stuff from you :P GOODNESS THIS WAS FLUFFY lol not that theres anything wrong with that, but i like how you were still able to project theyre relationship dynamic amongst all the fluff lol and no joke that little comment drakath made about Ty being perfect made me smile and D'AWWWWWW on the inside haha AND YOU KEEP TEASING US ABOUT TY'S BACKGROUND lol WHY?! Oh well, its honestly one of the main reasons why i read lol its alongside the fact im a fan of the game and a fan of ur writing :P well thats all lol good job once again, and im looking forward to everything you decide to post :P
Kaiban chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
OMG TRAKATH 3 idk y i enjoy this pairing so much but i just do lol and the more i read your works the more it becones evident that Ty is a dominatrix and drakath is a masochist lol jkjk but it seems like that sometimes xD well like u said a good relationship doesnt have someone wearing the pants which is true but it seems like Ty does a bit of pant wearing. Although, if you read closely you can see Drakath being just as in control as Ty can be yet it feels different because Drakath is known for being weak and non-threatening lol as for the writing i loved it, it was very dark edgy and fit the overall theme and their relationship perfectly. I like the comparison to the little red riding hood story lol my brain juices r sorta fried since its so early in the morning but i get the feel Ty is our wolf? Lol and now i wanna kno how Tys parebts met! And if this is in DE id be ecstatic lol heck if ANY of these one shots will b in DE ill be ecstatic xD anyway good job again, this was a WONDERDUL read, and i look forward to your next endeavor :D
Lana chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Omigosh, these stories are so great! I love em and now I can't wait for Double Edged to update! This fic answered my question from my review of your other story and now I'm curious about how it got to this point. This is set in the future of Double Edged right? Alison seemed pretty normal if not a tiny bit loony but wow she's crazy here. What happened? I'll be waiting to find out! Also the kingdom with yellow executing their ruler...that sounds familiar to me but i don't know where. Anyways, I like the way you write Drakath and Ty's really cool. The relationship that you write between them is just so...ah! Don't stop writing!
ThereisnoSyntaxhere chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
...I have no idea what this is. Is Alison your Christabella?
DragonkynNatKiasu chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Please update lissy-chan!
Kaiban chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Lol now I'm really curious about Ty's backstory xD I'm also curious about that note, so hopefully you'll add the next part soon :D I'm curious, which of these stories r going to appear or b referenced at least in Double Edged? Just felt like knowing is all :P and as for OOCness there's none that I can see lol I like the way Ty is the "alpha male" in her relationship with Drakath xD anyway I hope u feel better and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
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