|Reviews for Drowning|
| Kaiban chapter 5 . 3/2
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY NEW CHAP! Lol now that im back and getting updates again ill try not to miss any new stuff from you :P GOODNESS THIS WAS FLUFFY lol not that theres anything wrong with that, but i like how you were still able to project theyre relationship dynamic amongst all the fluff lol and no joke that little comment drakath made about Ty being perfect made me smile and D'AWWWWWW on the inside haha AND YOU KEEP TEASING US ABOUT TY'S BACKGROUND lol WHY?! Oh well, its honestly one of the main reasons why i read lol its alongside the fact im a fan of the game and a fan of ur writing :P well thats all lol good job once again, and im looking forward to everything you decide to post :P
| Kaiban chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
OMG TRAKATH 3 idk y i enjoy this pairing so much but i just do lol and the more i read your works the more it becones evident that Ty is a dominatrix and drakath is a masochist lol jkjk but it seems like that sometimes xD well like u said a good relationship doesnt have someone wearing the pants which is true but it seems like Ty does a bit of pant wearing. Although, if you read closely you can see Drakath being just as in control as Ty can be yet it feels different because Drakath is known for being weak and non-threatening lol as for the writing i loved it, it was very dark edgy and fit the overall theme and their relationship perfectly. I like the comparison to the little red riding hood story lol my brain juices r sorta fried since its so early in the morning but i get the feel Ty is our wolf? Lol and now i wanna kno how Tys parebts met! And if this is in DE id be ecstatic lol heck if ANY of these one shots will b in DE ill be ecstatic xD anyway good job again, this was a WONDERDUL read, and i look forward to your next endeavor :D
| Lana chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Omigosh, these stories are so great! I love em and now I can't wait for Double Edged to update! This fic answered my question from my review of your other story and now I'm curious about how it got to this point. This is set in the future of Double Edged right? Alison seemed pretty normal if not a tiny bit loony but wow she's crazy here. What happened? I'll be waiting to find out! Also the kingdom with yellow executing their ruler...that sounds familiar to me but i don't know where. Anyways, I like the way you write Drakath and Ty's really cool. The relationship that you write between them is just so...ah! Don't stop writing!
| ThereisnoSyntaxhere chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
...I have no idea what this is. Is Alison your Christabella?
| DragonkynNatKiasu chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Please update lissy-chan!
| Kaiban chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Lol now I'm really curious about Ty's backstory xD I'm also curious about that note, so hopefully you'll add the next part soon :D I'm curious, which of these stories r going to appear or b referenced at least in Double Edged? Just felt like knowing is all :P and as for OOCness there's none that I can see lol I like the way Ty is the "alpha male" in her relationship with Drakath xD anyway I hope u feel better and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
| From Rue with Love chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
XD lol chill bro! You did awsome. It was a spectacularly written story and both characters were very well-written and in character. My favorite part esprcially: "my stomach dies flip-flops when I'm in her presence, and I feel uncomfirtable just looking at her face." (sorry if it's not exactly correct but I'm sleepy xp) ;D I was like, you sure thar's cause you hate her? Cause it sounds like it might be someone else... XD
| Kaiban chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
Make more :D lol the relationship dynamic between Ty and Drakath is entertaining bcuz of the way u portray them both, with Ty usually being dominant xD lol I always did imagine Drakath as the type to b bad with expressing his feelings for other ppl, so this really amuses me haha, like I said, u rlly should make more, ur a better writer than u let on
| tbroski46 chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
i love these little shots between drakath and ty. they are really creative
| ThereisnoSyntaxhere chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
I love you. Thank you for this.
Also, Drakath kissing like a little girl is an awesome visual. For that, you have won the internet.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Cool story, as always. I feel a little disapointed that you plan on a Drakath pairing instead of someone like Zhoom or Tomix, but it's unique, I can't think of another story with a good pairing. I hope you update Double edged soon.
| Alduin chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
No she was not a Mary Sue and it was a decent story. i liked it at least, though i also have a nerd crush on Drakath for no reason at all so yeah.
Anyhow I thought she was a well developed character, Ty interested me a lot, plus the overall interaction was cute, and believable, and i don't think Drakath was OOC, you seemed to have him down in my book.
I didn't find too many errors, though i tend to miss them in a lot of works I read at first, and the dialogue was interesting, and Is it bad that when Ty spoke i heard Tara Strong? (VA for Presea Combatir, Twilight Sparkle, and Harley Quinn.)
| ThereisnoSyntaxhere chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Madam, I must applaud you. You have done something i would have thought was impossible: you actually made me like Drakath as a character.
I like the way he was portrayed here. His dialouge—and Ty's—was well written and believable. I wish to see more of this pairing now; do you think you could expand upon this story?