Reviews for The Pact
Nina of Fairy Tail chapter 23 . 7/16
Holy Shit! I'm sorry for swearing but damn. This was one of the deepest, realest and most gut renching stories I have ever read. You have a real gift.
Babytrouty chapter 23 . 3/7/2018
great story it was very interesting
Broadway's Next Baby chapter 23 . 11/22/2015
Whoa. That was heavy. Amazing story, I loved it, but whoa.
Broadway's Next Baby chapter 20 . 11/22/2015
This story is so good but why my Faberry heart what have you done
Louise chapter 23 . 10/5/2015
'She'd had a sister. Oh, she'd had a beautiful little baby sister. Kyla had been everything that Mercedes wanted to be when she was her age. She was strong. She was tall. She was beautiful, and everyone adored her.
And she died a little after she was born. In fact, she hardly lasted a day before she died because she had too much fluid in her lungs that they couldn't get out at the NICU.'

how was she tall if she was only a day old? that makes no sense.

and honestly, an autopsy would tell that artie overdosed. were his parents like 'oh no someone broke into our house and made our son die of mysterious reasons!'

an autopsy would also likely be able to distinguish between someone being hanged and someone being strangled. why can dave figure that out but not trained professionals?

'he'd barely gotten to know the boy, but wished there was something he could've said to help the closeted gay'

ah yes, the gay. if only he could have helped that gay. what a poor gay.

the majority of this story is OOC, bordering on ridiculous. I get what you were trying to achieve, but it fell flat.

ps: I realise this was written 3 years ago and you may have grown as a writer since. I know this review seems harsh and I apologise, but honestly so much of this story was problematic.
CarvieCamfia chapter 23 . 8/8/2015
Did people kill them so they could commit suicide? Xxx
TeamBrittany chapter 23 . 12/19/2014
You are a genius. This story is well-written, it's emotional, makes someone angry, happy, sad, feel abandoned and found at the same time.
rebelgirls4563 chapter 23 . 6/4/2014
Juana of Castile chapter 23 . 4/13/2014
OMG so good! And so sad! I find it so cool how close Mike's situation is to Moritz's!
WAngeline chapter 23 . 1/10/2014
I love this story up to the last story (especially seeing how I knew most of the songs) so thanks so much for writing. However, I don't think that this successfully serves as a warning against suicide. I mean, there are perks. Artie having his working legs, Tina reuniting with him, Kurt becoming Chloe, getting to see the world, although through a barrier. That's the only catch, isn't it?
Still, I don't mean to be a downer, I really enjoyed reading this.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
This needs to b M!
daisylollyxx chapter 23 . 10/8/2013
I was flicking through my list of favorite stories and read this again, still made me cry through out. It is beautifully written story no matter how sad.
Ze chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
;-; ;-; I feel like I have a love/hate relationship with this story. It made me cry...a lot. But I loved it.
Good work.
You made the unbreakable break. And I respect you for that.
JJ chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
I just read this story in one sitting, and can I just say how amazing you are? Because you truly are. This story was beautiful, truly beautiful and haunting. The only thing that's still unsettled in my mind is Sam's story, I reread the part again about the Sadie Hawkins dance, and could've it been Blaine? Blaine talked about how he had also experienced a beating at the Sadie Hawkins and then transferred to Dalton, and he has his older brother Cooper who could've been about to pick them up... Great story.
Guest chapter 23 . 8/1/2013
I have read every glee suicide fanfic and this one is by far the best. I LOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEDDDDDD IT!
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