|Reviews for Finding Kaoru|
| Redawaome chapter 21 . 1/23
Damn bro you are awsome I love the way you write...I guess that sounds kinda wird..sorry
| tangerienskies chapter 29 . 11/26/2013
do you mind if i make a fanfiction for a possible aftermath. this is great or as a friend of mine says "beyond brilliant!"
| xXyumpancakesXx chapter 29 . 9/14/2013
Wow, that story was really good! I really like how the red plague was one of those world-wide diseases that /wasn't/ the zombie apocolapse XD It was similar, but the story wasn't centered around killing all the infected in sight, it was just about Hikaru find Kaoru in a twisted world. I really liked the testing facilities part of the story as well. It made me think about a horror movie or something. Actually, around halloween there /is/ a halloween attraction in my town and the theme of it is a mad scientist... XD So it made me think of that. The ended was a bit abrupt and really open-ended, which I usually prefer close-ended stories. Nonetheless, I think it ended really good. This tends to be one of those stories that can branch off into several directions XD I can see a relationship with Tamaki and Haruhi forming, and of course a new story with many farther struggles that the 4 have out in that world. And then I can see a story that could be used with a whole new world, after the sancuaries open up with either the 4 long dead or alive at that point. So I'd say, with your ending, it suited very well. :) Your writing style was also very good. You explained the intensity of the situation perfectly. The only thing I would of liked better, was if you'd described the twins feelings without the other a little better. To me, they automatically knew they would see the other again, so they were worried, but not enough to have some serious doubts. Also, I'm very happy you just made this story about brothers, and not a twincest, so thank you for that! . I loved your story. :) Keep writing!
| orangepumpkins chapter 29 . 7/30/2013
Although I don't really like the open endedness of the ending, the plot was very creative! The details about Kaoru having superhuman blood made for so many possibilities and Uzo's corrupt single mindedness really reflected the possible corruption of the human race. Kudos on this.
| NeresKatana chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
*screams and runs everywhere* NOOOOOO! Not my darling little Kaoru! Poor baby! *strokes Kaoru's head* You can't get sick! Noooo!
Oh, btw, way awesome story loving it so far!
| a Tale with Ears chapter 29 . 7/20/2013
So I read this all, 1am in the morning. First I was yelling when they were seperated. Smiling when Kaoru found Haruhi. Saying, "ohhhh dayum" when Kaoru got shot. Created a new swear word when Haruka was found out to be a traitor. Crying and yelling and making other inhuman noises when Kaoru "died". But now I say, after finishing this amazing piece of amazing off-the-block piece of literature, I find myself tearing up because the two brothers were reunited once again! Schools should teach this in class to better educate children on how to write interesting stories with plots that the youth of today can still easily understand AND enjoy. They should compare this to other stories and show the "stories of yesterday" in comparison to the "stories of today"! Overall, an amazing story, by far the BEST Hitachiin related adventure/sci fi esque fanfiction I've read on this site!
| Coolness chapter 29 . 5/20/2013
| TheRozLujan chapter 28 . 5/9/2013
| TheRozLujan chapter 26 . 5/9/2013
Ha all I can think is that Hikaru's gonna turn into a zombie...and I fear this... :,( Poor Kaoru though...why is it always him? :(
| Ladie in Lace chapter 29 . 5/1/2013
| KasstheEchidna chapter 29 . 3/12/2013
OMFG. This is amazing! This is WAAAY beyond awesome! You even made me cry in the end when Kaoru died for a while! I thought he truly died, I was all like "NOOOOO! KAORUUU!" This was really deep, man. But it was one of the best stories I have ever read in my whole crappy life! ARIGATO! :'D
| TheKingOfOkay chapter 29 . 3/8/2013
Oh, my god, this story was fantastic. You should like so totally do a sequel. Maybe after everyone leaves the sanctuaries...
But even if you don't, I absolutely loved reading this story. I seriously finished it in about two hours, with some interruptions.. Seriously one of the best stories I've read ever.
| Mistle11411 chapter 24 . 2/26/2013
Damn you. (You know, for doin what you did to them... DAMN YOU!)
| Hanyoualchemist1 chapter 29 . 2/9/2013
May I do an epilogue of my own? You did leave it to our imaginations, and if you would like to read the ending I imagined, I will pm you a link.
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 29 . 2/3/2013
Power. You wrote this with absolute power. The graphic bloody/gorey scenes, the deaths, the lock down... I loved it so much!