Reviews for The Jinchuriki of the WorldEater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good crossover continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh hell. dagon, of all the deadric princes, he had to be the one naruto met first? let alone him being the one who created the juubi, and got a cult as Jashin. great, naruto's getting Dagon for a father in law. as if he wasnt screwed over before |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have nothing bad to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are good, not great, but good. Of course, I count "great" as writers like Jeconais and Rorschach's Blot so don't get too down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter CRA- at least he stay with the woman he wants looking foward the news of the clan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter and it's good to read from you again I just hope Hinata is one that stays with him to the end keep up the good work till next time, Hee Ho! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! A new chapter! Your story is definitely one of the more original crossovers I've read. I'm going to guess that Dagon's champion is either a female version of Hidan, an OC, or a canon Elder Scrolls or Naruto character that's been modified a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was gd i lk fored to next chapter i hope u update sn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read a goodly amount of fan-fiction and in my modest opinion you are rather good. That said wait times are among the most agonising things that any reader can go through (mild exaggeration there). Regardless an update, and an update of ten thousand words at that, is very welcome, the Skyrim/Naruto crossovers library isn't as big as I would like and this story shines out among what little is there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job, update soon please. 4.5/5 |
![]() ![]() Awesome as, needs more updates, you need to write more. Maybe that old, long abandoned HP one? Meh, updates are cool nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() Plz add Haku as well (No way in hell is she a guy). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello there sir, I must say I enjoy what you have done with the chapters. I would have updated prior, but I only recently decided to join this sometimes trying site. Near the end of The Purge, I believe. At any rate, this story continues to shape up rather well, and I do hope you continue with it in the near future. Some suggestions for the story, should you want them, would be to have the Female Jashinist be related to Hidan in some way. It does not have to be familial, and it is up to your discretion as to whether said relation sways Hidan's allegiances, fills him rage, or other. Out of curiosity, how shall you approach the shouts? I notice you have only had Naruto utilize single word shouts, with the exception of the clear skies shout. Is that intentional, or has he merely not seen a use for anything stronger yet? Other than that, I shall present them as they become relevant. Good day fine sir. |