Reviews for The Jinchuriki of the WorldEater
red chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
Your fic sucks.
Deathwatch Razgriz chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
Hey Soleneus, you troll face! I've got a question. Are we going to see any Daedra or Draemora? If so I would like to nominate Azura for Naruto's harem and Sheogorath as a potential ally in pranking. Peace.
Spiritofpower chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
It would seem I can't convince you to stay off the path you've taken with Naruto. But you know what? Do that. I'll keep reviewing if I feel the need to do so, regardless if you feel the need to completely replace Naruto's character. But, down to business.

For this chapter, no real flaws jump out at me, short of the justification for the liberties you've decided to take with Naruto's abilities, which get a pass because I understand that sometimes, it's freakin' HARD to justify all the cool things you put into your story. But I'm getting off track again, I guess this'll show me to try to write anything in the morning before I'm awake -_-

Anyways, I suppose it's time for... Harem Suggestions! (children cheering (oh gods I will never do this again until I am fully awake)) So, definitely fem!Haku, even though I'm still not convinced he's male, that man is just too feminine... But, I'm getting off track again. Possibly fem!Gaara, Anko (I think her name is, that hot chick that supervised the Chuunin exam, she wears a fishnet shirt :D), and I can easily see Ino and Sakura wanting in on the harem action, what with Naruto's character replacement making him the Sasuke of this fic. Though I do think it would be funny (not to mention hot, very hot) for Sakura and/or Ino to be les when it comes to... what was fem!Sasuke called again? I wanna say like Suki or something? Her, in any case.

Blegh, I'm done for now. I guess you'll see me again next chapter, hopefully I'll be awake then...
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
"how else are you going to legally let a guy practice polygamy, huh?"

...by using cultural differences to make it not illegal? Just saying. It's really only "illegal" right now because of the major religions and governments going "OMGDISGUSTING" and stuff. Marriage to one person can be, and oftentimes in my experience is, just as "disgusting" as having a group of people loving each other that much.

Just saying.

My pick would be one Mei Terumi, or one Kurotsuchi. For shits and giggles.
Teres22 chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
yay best skyrim crossover yet with naruto really looking forward to the next chapter :)
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Inoichi, not Inochi.

Kyuubi isn't technically a demon/daedra, so much as it is a giant sentient being of power, but since you seem to be combining the two worlds, this is mainly for my own conscience so you can ignore it.
Gundam Flag chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
Did you get Samui's thought off of the Lonely Island? Oh yeah, and good chapter.
kiyomos chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
harem harem harem... who 2 add 2 da harem? hmmm. not temari. shes shikimarus girl. ayame. femhaku. maaaby ino. NOT SAKURA! mei terumi. And just for laughs...fem kisame.
BlazaWolf chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
as long as it doesnt turn into mindless sex or you dont get off original topic this story is just gonna keep gettin better as it goes on
Danget the critic chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
Cliché stuff does work I will give you that.
Hee-Ho Master chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
Looks good man I know nothing about Skyrim but I do find the abilities neat as for the harem how about the 5th Mizukage she's a real looker keep up the good work till next time,

Hee-Ho!
destroyr352 chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
Nice choices to the Harem, though I've never really paid much attention to Yugito or Samui, plus, are they really siblings? Also the bloodline is a nice touch. Keep on doing what your doing.
Silber D. Wolf chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
Amazing fight, I hope that you update soon
WhereIsUp chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
I don't know the specifics of the time period or the requirement, but I'm quite sure that Japan was polygamous society.

And since you have Feudal Lords, and Clans, it would make more sense if the requirements were just to be able to pay for their needs, along with perhaps a tax (and maybe some form of nobility).

And just that would most likely make it so the only people with more than one wife would be the upper class and nobles.

Also: CRA? WTF dude? That's so cliché!

Thanks for the update!
Narjiro chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
add in karin and Tayuya please. atleat they would be easy to explain why they joined naruto unlike others, because who cares about oto.
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