Awesome story.

Write more my lord

looks good keep it up till next time,

Hee-Ho!

Best skyrim naruto cross I've read so far. and add karin please

The MST3K Mantra is STRONG with this fic.

Don't f*ck up.

Forever Signed in Blood,

Slayer End

amazing story, good end, I hope that you update soon

The onyl other girl I could possibly ask for yuo to add to this epic harem so far would be anko. I know she's a little too old for naruto, but she's still hot, and I love her personality and character. Not as much as Hinata and tayuya, but still.

Anyways, not bad so far. A very excellent start. I can't wait to see what happens next here.

I am really enjoying this story so far! _

Your z observation that spars would get harder is an understatement, Hannabi, and Hinata would probably use the cage bird seal... Girls are petty like that.

Good story so far.

As for the harem, you should leave it as is otherwise it will be hard to juggle the girls.

Any who, I look forward to more

When people of the Naruto fandom gives the main character new clothes, a certain quote always comes to mind: "You can have it any color you want, as long as it's black."

But seriously! What is everyone's fetish with giving Naruto monochrome black clothes? If it's because 'His orange jumpsuit is hideous hurr-durr" Then there are darker shades of it! Take Naruto's shippuden outfit, for instance; the orange ain't all that bright, and it has a good deal of black on it, too! Ah, but enough of my ranting.

What I did like about the story is that the plot (what much there is at the moment) has decent potential to become very interesting. That and you didn't fall into the horribly overdone cliche of Naruto being beaten as a child. Good job on that.

What I think you could do a bit better at, however, is not make Naruto so powerful so soon at the beginning of the story. If he's so powerful, then most enemies will be too much of a cake walk to deal with, and the story and plot may suffer from that. However, if you were to allow Naruto to 'grow' and gradually get stronger as the story progresses, as well as making fights with higher ranked enemies a struggle, then the plot will get that much better. Also, what's with Alduin gaining a human form? He can raise Naruto in his dragon form just as well if Natsu and Igneel from the manga/anime Fairy Tail is anything to go by.

Well, that's the end of the review, hope the criticism was constructive!

it was a gd start i lk fored to the chapter.

Naruto got (Elder) scrolled! I hope Madara will have close encounter with the moon.

please tell me the fem Neji is in the harem and Hana Inuzuka