Wow. An engaging, reasonable Naruto fic that doesn't just jump into Shippuden or do YET ANOTHER "Main character is Dragonborn, because I'm too lazy to come up with an interesting character for Dovahkiin!" thing. At least you have a logical explanation as to why Naruto can use Shouts, and choose to simply acknowledge Dovahkiin exists and take the story away from him (or her, in your case).

One thing you must watch out for, though; DO NOT, I repeat, DO NOT make Naruto -TOO- powerful. If he absolutely destroys every villain, there's no suspense. Besides that, turning him into a Sasuke clone (is smart, logical, good at everything, popular with the girls) pretty much destroys Naruto's entire character, so avoid that. Try to distance him from that, like make him really bad at Chakra control, and a bit of a blind idiot when it comes to girls, as a few examples. Also, I would put in an OOC!Naruto disclaimer somewhere.

Keep in mind, though, if Naruto continues down the path he is going so far (essentially perfect, with no real character flaws or endearing qualities) this story is going to end up mediocre at best, bad at worst. So watch out. But, if you can preserve Naruto's character whilst still effecting large changes due to Alduin's influence, and keep the plot largely similar to the anime/manga's, then this could turn out really good.

So, is kurama a daedra in this story and if so does that explain why he doesn't seem all that strong from your description?

very good story please update soon.

this is the best skyrim naruto crossover i have read so far i think that i will enjoy reading this

Well this is different. I want to see how this goes down, so keep it up. As for the harem, I was wondering if you could add Ayame and maybe a fem-Kyuubi (although not until much later).

gotta admit you have me curious to see where your going to go with this. looking forward to the next chapter

Nice great start to the story I like it also I like who you have in Naruto harem update soon

As long as all the girls have enough screen time I really dont mind whos in it, Im curious as to whats going to happen to kyuubi? maybe do a fem kyuubi after she mellows out? or not, you have plenty of girls already for the harem, just a sugestion.

Great it's about time someone tried something like this and got it right I say for harem add Nibi(with Yugito), Mei, Kurenai, FemHaku, and Anko

Awesome. I was wondering when this would come out. Actually, I kinda forgot about it, sorry _' but then it came out. Nice to see you're still alive. Glad to see my favorites in the listings, and I still found the arrow bit pretty cool.