BlackSyarMage
Did you read the lore of Elder Scroll because from what I can get from your 1st comment of saying that Dragonborn not being more powerful than those of Naruto, I assume that you didn't. Please research properly before you start saying nonsense. Lore of Elder Scroll is scary. Place Kaguya and entire Alieni Clan against Alduin and they still get one-shotted. Alduin, in game, was about to devour a kalpa! And if you don't know what it is, you can search how big a kalpa is TES lore.

it is shame this fic has fallen to the way side

DO you have to gender bend everything though, I know I said in my previous review that I was mostly fine with it, but gender bending things that don't have genders then conniving a rather stupid ( in my opinion) situation with Mehrunes Dagon, and him being the creator of the tailed beasts ( or rather their progenitor) is quite stupid, especially that marriage on condition of defeat thing that's going on there, I don't know I'm posting this review before finishing the chapter, something I usually don't do. I'm going to go back to reading the chapter where I left off, and if Naruto actually does accept this marriage 'proposal' then I'm going to stop reading (a dire threat indeed) because Naruto just got done in the last chapter saying that he wants to marry only the person that he loves, him rolling over ass up for the pounding his ego wants to take for every marriage proposal that come his way is utterly ridiculous. If (as I suspect might happen with the way this story is going so far) There is is ever a convoluted way that Naruto marries/becomes husband and wife(s) with all the tailed beasts I would like warning from whoever reads this conveniently useless review. Furthermore, if through some even more convoluted plot Naruto becomes lovers/husband and wife with Kaguya Otsutsuki, I would like a properly scathing warning, that contain proper abuse towards the author of this fic. Still gonna keep reading though

this is entertaining, so I'm definitely going to continue reading, but why did you make the shinobi from Naruto so weak. I mean, I can understand eventually having Naruto be this strong, but the elder scrolls series isn't particularly powerful. I mean, yeah, there's gods and Daedra that are super powerful, but even the dragon born (as in the character you play as in Skyrim) isn't all that powerful compared to some of the stuff in Naruto. That, is a little irritating, but I'm mostly fine with it, when stuff like this happens in stories I usually just chalk it up to creative license. What I have more trouble understanding is why you made all the female character seem soo... weak. I can understand the gender bending, I can even understand the harem even if I usually don't like it in stories I read unless A.) It's done really well, or B.) The rest of the story is good enough to ignore it. And I don't mean the female characters are weak in the physical power sense, they will probably be able to kick ass just as well, if to less effect, as Naruto, but I mean in the emotional sense. I could of course be wrong, this is only the second chapter after all, but it seems to me like all women in Naruto's life, and not just in the romantic sense, will be either dependent on Naruto, or dependent on some other person. Again I could be wrong as this is only the second chapter, and I haven't read any of the reviews for chapters further ahead. Still going to read the rest of this story even with all the problems that I'm currently seeing in it, I've got nothing else to read currently, and I have nothing better to do.

add the fact that Naruto has Alduin and the nine tails sealed in him, plus him being a Uzumaki, so the harem makes sense. i know this is not a review, iam just rereading the story.

p.s i mostly skip author notes, so i didnt read them last i read this

Great job with this chapter

Was he getting high

why is this abandoned it was so gud :(

Really not liking how Kiba acts like cannon naruto

So is there going to be an update for this sometime in the future?

Cool chapter hope you will update soon its been awhile since the last one

exposition dumping much?

Update soon please

You haven't updated this story in over three years. Have you abandoned this story Soleneus?

ooh not the balls...