Reviews for When angels fall
Arckangel chapter 16 . 7/12/2012
this chapter was simply incredible. the descriptions were spot on. I loved how you wrote the soap foam turning colors and her reaction to all of the things Sam was doing or trying to make her do. This was perfect. I hope Dean wakes up soon...
Arckangel chapter 15 . 6/24/2012
this was a very good chapter. I was drawn into it fairly well. tho i became confused for a little bit, i think it made sense in the end. or my brain is just really fried right now. But I am enjoying your story. I'm glad I started reading this. i don't read too many fics. I should really start.I like this a lot tho. Michael is just amazing in this. :)
Arckangel chapter 14 . 6/20/2012
OOo I like it. I have a dark little spot inside of me that is really into this type of stuff. I want to read more. O.O. Please? Very good descriptions as usual...your very good at what you write. I loved the lungs. hehe. it made me think of Fancy Feast...the kind with little pink chunks in it. :). I gave some to my cat earlier. Awesome tho. I want more.
Arckangel chapter 13 . 6/19/2012
oh my goodness. this was an amazing and very heartfelt chapter. The emotions were portrayed perfectly and the descriptions were even better. :). I loved the way you describe him taking the blood. So good.
UnknownUnseenUnheard chapter 13 . 6/14/2012
Another special child. Hmm...

Another means Azazel kept busy.

After all, he said there were 'other generations'.

So, does that mean there will be more of them in this?

Anyways, good chapter. Dark, too.

randy chapter 4 . 6/13/2012
th transition between chapter one and two could have said a little more as far as the car ride went on the way to the hotel room. as far as chapter four it probably would have went better if you werent to busy looking for reviews if you want crack then you got it as far as the first three chapters keep going props to you
Arckangel chapter 12 . 6/13/2012
I honestly don't really know whats going on but thats because I'm stupid, most of the time. hehe. but I really enjoyed this chapter. i could just picture everything happening. Especially with Dean's stuff. Amazing work. :D
UnknownUnseenUnheard chapter 12 . 6/13/2012
I'm starting to suspect the voice in the corner isn't Lucifer at all. He reminds me more of Azazel, to be honest...

Is it some type of demon ghost?


Anyways, good chapter.

UnknownUnseenUnheard chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
Actually, it happened exactly as I thought. It's torturing Dean, but not outright killing him. It seemed to be healing him a bit too.

Anyways, good chapter.

Arckangel chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
you write so amazingly. I loved everything about it. especially the eyeball part. :P.

i would write more in this bc i loved a lot of it but my mind isn't working very well right now.
Arckangel chapter 10 . 6/10/2012
oh wow this is really good. I love the descriptions. so awesome. :D
UnknownUnseenUnheard chapter 10 . 6/10/2012
I recognized a bit of the Latin. But, that's more due to me being fairly fluent in Spanish than anything else. Then again, I know several Latin routes, so that helps too.

Sam gave Dean his blood... Causing Dean to literally burn up.

If dean was a normal human, I'm sure that would kill him. But, Dean went to Hell, right? He isn't normal. So, while it hurts, it shouldn't downright slaughter him. What it will ultimately do, however, I'm not sure...

Good chapter.

Arckangel chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
OOooo! Oh my goodness! This chapter was, just perfect. You described the scene and the emotions and thoughts so well that I thought it was happening! It literally seemed like a scene from a show just written onto paper. I have no critiques...just how perfect this chapter was. Amazing work!
UnknownUnseenUnheard chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
Dean already had some grace in him. Hmm... Castiel? That, or both Sam and Dean had something like that in them, which was the source of Sam's powers. As Azazel is technically a fallen angel according to lore, that's possible.

Dean needs blood. Sam's is useless. Yet, we have a perfectly good angel standing there just a few feet away from a very desperate and dangerous Sam Winchester.


Good chapter

Killingdanse chapter 8 . 5/29/2012
I just wanted to thank everyone for their reviews and mention the first thing she says is in Enochian and it is the closest I could get to Where is Castiel since Enochian does not contain a word for Where. She changes to Latin because Dean obviously doesn't understand Enochian not that he understand Latin. I might include that song again later on because it is so fitting for Sammy and Dean.
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