Reviews for Scorched
Howlynn chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
I really like your angry John - I adore Mummy too.

There are a few typos but overall it is very well written and I am very interested in what happens next - love your little backstories and I think I am most intrigued because it is an odd pairing and it is so fun to explore those dynamics - great Job hope your personal stuff smooths out soon.
hjohn302 chapter 4 . 6/14/2012
Wow! This is really good! Hope you keep updating... you have me hooked!
Forever Day chapter 4 . 6/4/2012
This was really great. Anthea/Claire coming to live in the flat was interesting as was the new plot development. No real critique, I'll just ask you to update soon.
insertwittynicknamehere chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
That's the second mobile in not that long. He's not good at keeping them, is he? I'm thinkin that Moran is the one responsible for the attacks, but it could be anyone. I hope that Claire is okay- the mention of her being bloody worries me. She's really not having a good time these past few days (broken nose, insults about fiancee, and now this). I feel really sorry for her.

I'm predicting that Mycroft saved Anthea's life a while back and that's why they're so close (abusive parents/boyfriend or maybe she was in a gang or hooked on drugs or something).

Anyways, this is really well-written and emotional. I love it.
Rhyolight04 chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
Personal things happen. I hope some of them were good. I like the way you write your characters, or Steven Moffat's characters or whoever they are. I hope you have a chance to update soon.
Rhyolight04 chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
You're really good? Please write more? Thank you for not being facile? All of the above.

And not to be too horrible, perhaps you could recommend me a few more Sherlock fanfic writers whom you respect? There are a LOT of you out there. Seven episodes and 10K stories.
Rhyolight04 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
This is so good. Thank you for writing carefully and well, with punctuation and grammar as well as sincerity.
Zora Arian chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
ARGH! CLIFFHANGER?

Oh, Anthea... :(

Thanks for the update; cant wait for next chapter! HURRY! :DDD
SingBenihime chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
You are an evil, evil person for leaving a cliffhanger like that!
LaelaRose chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
Only just found this story and I'm loving it. John and Mycroft are really in character, and I love how you've made Anthea/Claire a proper character who actually shows emotion. I like how you're introduced the Holmes mother too :D

Keep up the fantastic work xxx
Zora Arian chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Oh wow. I really love this fic! I've never read one about how John would be after Sherlock's death (maybe cos i'm too busy reading Sherlolly instead?), and yours might be plausible :) John being angry is a different side, and yeah, he's a soldier, so after he shouted at Anthea, i got abit scared as well...

Oh John, big trouble now eh? ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE THIS? PLEASE DO! I'll be waiting! :DDD
bbybyrd chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
I like this story. Hope you will continue!
Brennason chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
I have to admit. I laugh at the fact that John used the term damn good shag. But wow. Poor Claire. John really freaked out on her.
learningtowrite1996 chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
(This should be on ch.3. IDK why it is on ch.2) Anyways, really good. I'm hooked and I like it a lot. Please update soon, I'll be looking out for this one. Poor John, I always feel so bad for him, with everything he is dealing with. And you are writing his character well. The end of chapter 3 is kinda creepy. I'm excited to see what will happen next! :)
SidMax chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
This is getting good. Very well done with John losing control. I think you're doing very nicely at portraying the anger that goes along with loss. Definitely can't wait to see how Mycroft is diverted from killing John.
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