Reviews for A promise to CPL Yost
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 4/7
Awesome work. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/11
Jebeth chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Awesome story.
1sunfun chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
ladyaloysius chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Too cool! Loved it! Durning was awesome as Cpl. Yost!
trout1986 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I cried, good story.
Ernie was a great man
To all the Ernies out there on Veteran's Day,
Thank you
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
so sweet
barbaratakuyaho chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I liked it.
sazzieazzie chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I love it but you need to tell how they felll in love too
NCIS fan chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Lovely, lovely bittersweet story. Sniffle. I love stories with Corporal Yost in them.

A (hopefully!) constructive criticism: I think you should remove the sentence "A man that once the case was solved he let fade from his memory." This doesn't go along with the rest of the story that shows how Tony continued to have contact with Ernie over the years. You don't need to replace the line with anything else - the previous sentence stands perfectly on its own.

Love this line "...the former Marine had glistening eyes and was standing at attention as he looked upon the old warrior laying in the ICU bed." Beautiful image of Gibbs honoring Ernie.

I'm glad Tony named his firstborn son after Ernie.
Ladyaloysius chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Very loving tribute to Cpl. Yost!
Really liked it!
wytygr chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Tony and Garcia would be awesome together!
AgentD.6 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Very sweet, I always thought they should tie Ernie back into a story line and yours worked great.
lizrat66 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
this is the second story of yours that has made me cry today.
Natalie chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
What a great story. I loved it. I'm so glad that you didn't have Tiva in it and had Tony marry someone else. Loved that you had Tony have his son's middle name as Ernesto nicknamed Ernie. Great job on such a wonderful story.
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