Reviews for A promise to CPL Yost
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
neat I love yost stories his conon plot is meny a soilder but leaves so much room for fan fun thanks for sharing
the other of your stories are great also
Darth Becky 726 chapter 1 . 3/14
Ah, Anthony DiNozzo, III. I like how it's 'Ernesto' instead of just 'Ernest'. The 'o' makes it Italian. ;) This was sweet.
laraquick chapter 1 . 2/27
Well done, Tony.
Sarai chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
bjq chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Awesome work. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Jebeth chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Awesome story.
1sunfun chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
ladyaloysius chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Too cool! Loved it! Durning was awesome as Cpl. Yost!
trout1986 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I cried, good story.
Ernie was a great man
To all the Ernies out there on Veteran's Day,
Thank you
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
so sweet
barbaratakuyaho chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I liked it.
sazzieazzie chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I love it but you need to tell how they felll in love too
NCIS fan chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Lovely, lovely bittersweet story. Sniffle. I love stories with Corporal Yost in them.

A (hopefully!) constructive criticism: I think you should remove the sentence "A man that once the case was solved he let fade from his memory." This doesn't go along with the rest of the story that shows how Tony continued to have contact with Ernie over the years. You don't need to replace the line with anything else - the previous sentence stands perfectly on its own.

Love this line "...the former Marine had glistening eyes and was standing at attention as he looked upon the old warrior laying in the ICU bed." Beautiful image of Gibbs honoring Ernie.

I'm glad Tony named his firstborn son after Ernie.
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