|Reviews for Part Of Your World|
| Lord Nitro chapter 1 . 7/7
The only thing I have to say is the scene in the underworld, the beginning is way too confusing. I had to read it 9 times, and I counted, to make sure I got it right, and even then I wasn't sure I got it right. Using terms like 'male demigod' or 'beautiful goddess' is fine, but the way it came off was Hermes' had a wife, and then it spiraled into anarchy. The key is elaboration, not too much. I wouldn't want you to just constantly go 'Persephone snarked' or 'Eros screeched' or what-not. Saying terms, such as Male Demigod, Beautiful Goddess, Primordial/Protogenos of Night, Titaness of Memory, etc are fine, but there needs to be a semblance of understanding.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
Please update soon as possible please please
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/5
How is Fab blond?
| LostElements chapter 1 . 2/12
The NicoxAnnabeth is gonna be painful. But I can deal. Hopefully...
| Lord Nitro chapter 18 . 7/21/2016
I ship Sabi. I ship it. Sanabi? I like Sabi better.
| Lord Nitro chapter 16 . 7/21/2016
I ship it.
| Lord Nitro chapter 9 . 7/21/2016
Okay honestly, this is so freaking hysterical. I love how Drunk!Percy acts, it's hysterical.
I have a feeling if I ever got drunk, I'd act like Percy by saying one thing and if they agree with me I'll start being like "Oh, so you don't want that now?" And stuff..
| lifelovelaugh chapter 5 . 7/14/2016
Lmfao i knew it!
| Darkness Death and Riches chapter 26 . 5/15/2016
Please make a sequel? I loved this story. But having read Catching Fireflies first, I can't help but make the comparisons and be like "oh, Fabi is so much like Donny!" when I'm pretty sure it's the other way around. But I love your stories, so I would be in love if you would bring this story out from the archives...
| XxTealJadexX chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
jeez, fuck why am i in love with this kink?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
annico nicobeth ...swag
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/27/2015
What is the sequel called ?
| Annabethsgirl chapter 26 . 11/25/2014
I know that feeling...I lost my novel when my laptop died a few years ago...2 1/2 years of work...just gone, sighs. Anyways, I actully really liked this, so if you ever get back into it again, I would love to read a sequel, maybe the quest or something. I'm also ok with the Annabeth/Nico pairing. I didn't like that Percy had to lose the babies though, poor love, :(. Anyways, good job as always, :)
| GO PERCICO chapter 26 . 9/25/2014
| GO PERCICO chapter 5 . 9/25/2014