Reviews for Part Of Your World
Lord Nitro chapter 1 . 7/7
The only thing I have to say is the scene in the underworld, the beginning is way too confusing. I had to read it 9 times, and I counted, to make sure I got it right, and even then I wasn't sure I got it right. Using terms like 'male demigod' or 'beautiful goddess' is fine, but the way it came off was Hermes' had a wife, and then it spiraled into anarchy. The key is elaboration, not too much. I wouldn't want you to just constantly go 'Persephone snarked' or 'Eros screeched' or what-not. Saying terms, such as Male Demigod, Beautiful Goddess, Primordial/Protogenos of Night, Titaness of Memory, etc are fine, but there needs to be a semblance of understanding.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
Please update soon as possible please please
Guest chapter 21 . 4/5
How is Fab blond?
LostElements chapter 1 . 2/12
The NicoxAnnabeth is gonna be painful. But I can deal. Hopefully...
Lord Nitro chapter 18 . 7/21/2016
I ship Sabi. I ship it. Sanabi? I like Sabi better.
Lord Nitro chapter 16 . 7/21/2016
I ship it.
Lord Nitro chapter 9 . 7/21/2016
Okay honestly, this is so freaking hysterical. I love how Drunk!Percy acts, it's hysterical.

I have a feeling if I ever got drunk, I'd act like Percy by saying one thing and if they agree with me I'll start being like "Oh, so you don't want that now?" And stuff..
lifelovelaugh chapter 5 . 7/14/2016
Lmfao i knew it!
Darkness Death and Riches chapter 26 . 5/15/2016
Please make a sequel? I loved this story. But having read Catching Fireflies first, I can't help but make the comparisons and be like "oh, Fabi is so much like Donny!" when I'm pretty sure it's the other way around. But I love your stories, so I would be in love if you would bring this story out from the archives...
XxTealJadexX chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
jeez, fuck why am i in love with this kink?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
annico nicobeth ...swag
Guest chapter 26 . 1/27/2015
What is the sequel called ?
Annabethsgirl chapter 26 . 11/25/2014
I know that feeling...I lost my novel when my laptop died a few years ago...2 1/2 years of work...just gone, sighs. Anyways, I actully really liked this, so if you ever get back into it again, I would love to read a sequel, maybe the quest or something. I'm also ok with the Annabeth/Nico pairing. I didn't like that Percy had to lose the babies though, poor love, :(. Anyways, good job as always, :)
GO PERCICO chapter 26 . 9/25/2014
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWW
GO PERCICO chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!
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