Reviews for Falling into Entropy
karen1025 chapter 16 . 10/2/2013
Are you still updating?
TourmalineBlue chapter 16 . 8/8/2012
It's like a roller coaster, up and down, happy and sad, yet fun at the same time. Please update soon!:)
Marcie Gore chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
wonderful eotioma; chapter!
Marcie Gore chapter 2 . 5/28/2012
is she going for it to get Cousty
Marcie Gore chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
YOu write them so WEll!
RumpelluvsBelle chapter 16 . 5/14/2012
Suck It Bitch! Rumbelle happened and now you and all you pathetic Golden Swan shippers can cry about how stupid you are all. GOLDEN SWAN SUCKS!
Twyla Mercedes chapter 16 . 5/7/2012
thx for the updated chapter - Gold's alot more sympathetic in this one.

FYI, not trying to bust your hump - you did a good job with the assault with the last chapter - maybe too good; too real. I deal with the aftermath of these types of situations with my day job and it was like you had pulled the manual out that rapists and molesters use to blame the victim and absolve themselves of responsibility. They always have reasons for their behavior and will use shame to manipulate their victims so they don't report. Your Gold in this most recent chapter was kind and sensitive (and so much more sympathetic). It's hard to reconcile this Gold with the sleezeball who drugged and raped Emma (even if he has these desperate reasons to propel the behavior). I'm curious if she's going to move beyond the assault to forgiveness - that should take awhile and will haunt any future physical relationship they might have. thx much for the new chapter. I plan to keep reading. txm
ParanormalMoonlight chapter 16 . 5/7/2012
Okay. I'm becoming repetitive... Damn. Lol. I hope you and your partner get them back together. And I agree with T-W. (I didn't wanna spell he/she name wrong) Emma is acting way diff than I would of thought. But I do hope they try and get back together. Can't wait for more. Did he do a DNA test! Ahhhh. Lol
Twyla Mercedes chapter 15 . 5/1/2012
whoa. OK bit concerned here. (Not commenting on your writing style or prose - this is just fine), but not happy with Emma's response to being drugged and sexually assaulted - she really should be arresting Gold's ass and throwing him under the jail, otherwise we start getting into misplaced guilt (really now, his behavior is not her fault and she should not be ashamed of what has happened to her - he did it) or Stockholm Syndrome if she buys into his reasons, making it ok. I'm curious how you're going to reconcile them (if you plan to) or is this a permanent is he going to slip her his Love Potion? Look forward to your next chapter to see how you're going to resolve this situation. thx txm
ParanormalMoonlight chapter 15 . 5/1/2012
Damn... Again. Lol wonders what will happen next.
yuiop chapter 14 . 4/19/2012
Nice
yuiop chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
Nice
Twyla Mercedes chapter 14 . 4/18/2012
Interesting chapter. I'm curious if Gold will be able to get Emma back into his bed after sexually assaulting her (using a drug, no less); it may have made sense to him but is otherwise reprehensible and pretty unforgiveable. Of course he still has his money and will certainly use Henry as leverage. look forward to the next chapter. txm
Anon Reader chapter 13 . 4/18/2012
This was a great chapter. It was erotic but it also turned my stomach.
ParanormalMoonlight chapter 14 . 4/18/2012
I wonder how he is going to respond to that little tid bit of info. And how she is going to try and play off of it. Do interesting.
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