Reviews for The Rise of a Warlord
Joseph-Alexander chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
This was good...though will isaribi join red cell? Underwater specialist?
shadows24 chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
Nice chapter glad to see that naruto gave isaribi one more chance but sill not without a price befiting calling him dark anyway i cant wait for more
kazikamikaze24 chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
A very wicked end to a battle/mission! I wonder what shall happen next.
anon chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
naruto is an arrogant fuckin' moron. his self preservation instincts seems to have disappeared totally.
Desturion chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
Great as always
Omegalus chapter 22 . 5/1/2012
really good, can't wait for the next chapter.

Looking forward to seeing what the next story arc is.

Naruto's dark personality has been written really well
wolf2021 chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
another good chapter love it keep up the good work
Kharneth666 chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
love the alucard quote. very appropriate for this portrayal of naruto
hugp1x chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
Neruto's 'wise' comment about men killing monstets makes no sense, lol.

Either Amachi is a monster, and therefore, naruto, a self proclaimed monster shouldn't be able to kill him, or...

Amachi is just a man, in which case he should be able to kill naruto, or...

Naruto mislabelled himself...

Either way, I recommend revision.
bakapervert chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
I'm starting to dislike your Naruto. For all of his big talk and tough guy talk, he is got blindsided too often by the villain.
dbtiger63 chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
Glad this arc has completed and he can move forward becoming the title character again. In his other endeavors he seemed to have ulterior motives to move his agenda forward. This arc didn't seem to do that especially after killing Amichi. The initial vision in the first chapter setup all other activities to me and for him to gain the resources, people and otherwise, he has to constantly grow as a person and his organization has to also grow. With Snow country he made arrangements to gain personally from his work, here he just seemed to complete a mission.

Thanks

DB
xxAkuxx chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
Dark Naruto is awesome! Can't wait till he's all 'I will rule the world' Kekekeke!
Heliosion chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
If I repeat myself AGAIN it's because Naruto carries this fic on his own yet again. Though nice spin on amachi's death
J.E.P 1996 chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
its a good story so far, but how long do you estimate the amount of chapters?
Maleivius chapter 22 . 4/30/2012
I enjoyed the chapter, the fighting was well done, and I feel kinda bad that I laughed at that corny joke at the end. Anyway, can't wait for the next update.
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