Reviews for The Rise of a Warlord
True Assassins chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
great chapter I especially liked the tsume yelling who farted part that got me laughing hard I also can't wait to see what happens next oh and is Kabuto only loyal to Naruto now and why was he rubbing his chest painfully?
MoonHunter123 chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
I was hesitant to read this at first because I'm not a huge fan of stories that start at the end, but you've really managed to reel me in.

Your English is very good. I only spotted a few errors.

Update soon!
turbomagnus chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
I am perhaps in the minority, but I am personally less interested at the moment in Naruto getting stuck with Team Seven again for the exams than I am another matter...


Kabuto himself was involved in the whole faked attack on him by the Sound Genin after he read his nin-info cards during the first test, then one of his teammates was responsible for the (relatively easy) fight that got Sasuke into the finals. With Kabuto now in Red Cell - however Naruto may have 'ensured' his loyalty - and the rest of his team dead, they obviously won't be involved in the Chunin Exams, which leaves me wondering how that will affect things.
miner249er chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
good chapter
shadows24 chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
Very nice chapter a unique way of dealing with team 7and a original way to use Naruto's abilities i hope that the story does lead to naruto being evil like the first chapter implies and i cant wait to see how he progresses
Insane Winxy chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
That has to be the best job for Naruto ever..

do pleese updrtae soon..
Infidel94 chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
Seriously, if you truly wish to make this story, more interesting, then skip this bullshit, and show us the Future, while showing us some flashbacks or something, that are related and crucial to the stories plot.
True Assassins chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
first off let me say this is one of the best warlord naruto stories I have read so far and its awesome next let me say I can't wait to read more in the future and hope you keep up the great work also stick it to kakashi that would be great anyway keep up the awesome work ja for now
Siriusly Grim chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
An intresting idea. I hope to see more.
Omegalus chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
really good, can't wait to see how this story continues to develop
miner249er chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
pretty good
miner249er chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
a intriguing begining
sertry chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
wolf2021 chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
naruto as a dead cell esque black ops member AWESOME! although the chapter has so minor errors in it that detract from the greatness that this story is so far keep up the great work
wolf2021 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
great new story im just glad to see you back here writing again keep up the exellent work
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