Reviews for The Rise of a Warlord
devilbwoy chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
Epicly awesome
shadows24 chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
Nice past two chapters glad to see him giving it to anko even if just for sex also would love to know how naruto controls kabuto anyway thanks for the slight lemon and the new chapter cant wait for more
pip naruto chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
ROFL the last lemon on youre story had me almost die from laughing xD
jh831 chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
enjoying the story

like the lemon sceen with anko

liked how he ignored Jaria

can't wait to see the next chapter
Omegalus chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
really good. Loved how Naruto interacted with Jiraya and how the self proclaimed Super Pervert has reacted to this new Naruto in General.

Also i'd like to retract my statment from the prvious review of Naruto being Anko's semi-reluctant sex partner. From this chapter it definetly seems like Anko and Naruto hacve a Friends with benifits scenario going.

It'll be interesting to see who Naruto fights in the finals after Neji, let alone if any of the three Jinchuriki in the exams get to fight each other as a offical match before Orochimaru attempts to start the Invasion.

looking forward to the next chapter
Fox of the Blood Moon chapter 6 . 3/23/2012
Nice very nice Hehehehe perverted giggle.
miner249er chapter 6 . 3/22/2012
you got to feel sorry for the neighbours
True Assassins chapter 6 . 3/22/2012
LOLZ loved the ending the chunin would not be getting any sleep that is for sure I can't wait to see what happens in the finals or the invasion for that matter keep up the great work ja for now
Mr.Halcall chapter 5 . 3/22/2012
Nice to see you back in action. I feel this story should receive more attention. Its really well written.
Omegalus chapter 5 . 3/21/2012
really good. Loved how Naruto tired the tables on Anko so that her obessession with him is more of a semi-reluctant friends with beifits scenario.

Really liked how Naruto dealt with Neji and Sasuke in the forest and the fight against Kiba was well done.

Looking forward to the next chapter
karthik9 chapter 5 . 3/21/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
True Assassins chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
great chapter and story I am really enjoying the dark Naruto you have here hope he is also gonna have a summon thats not toads anyway keep up the great work ja for now
Reaper chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
Really gd story hope you update soon. Also I hope you put a lemon in the next chapter. I hope you add Tsume and Hana in a lemon with Naruto also. You could have Tsume confront Naruto when he gets back to the villiage and put a lemon between them. Also I hope you add Yugao, Ayame, Kurenai and ino also. Please update soon.
Mzr90 chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
Really awesome chapter just hope the next is longer.
Trinel chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
Thanks for the update! Liked the chapter.

Neji had it coming, ha! Liked that scene. And is Ten-Ten really paralyzed? seems like Gai messed up in holding Lee back. As things go, wonder if anything is in store for Hinata and Lee.
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