Reviews for The Rise of a Warlord
Omegalus chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
really good, can't wait to see how this story continues to develop
miner249er chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
pretty good
miner249er chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
a intriguing begining
sertry chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
wolf2021 chapter 2 . 3/10/2012
naruto as a dead cell esque black ops member AWESOME! although the chapter has so minor errors in it that detract from the greatness that this story is so far keep up the great work
wolf2021 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
great new story im just glad to see you back here writing again keep up the exellent work
Absimilard chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
It is incredible how many dark (even if most does not deserve to be called as such) and evil Naruto stories have been written and still are being done, like yours or mine, as if to show Kishi where he made the mistake with Naruto in the first place. Anyway, I am not sure what to say exactly about this story, since it is still rather developing. It seems interesting, but there are no explanations for anything, is somewhat lacking in description when it comes to characters and most importantly, no real story behind it, at least so far. After all, everything must begin somewhere. I am not trying to flame mind you, just saying what could be done differently. Still, it seems worth watching, I am interested where you will take this.
shadows24 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Not bad cant wait to see where it goes i just hope naruto isnt totally evil and heartless also hope to see updates from your other stories soon since nothings been updated in months anyway cant wait for more
Aldo Montoya chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Dawn, what a start. Loving this idea. Hoping that Naruto did have true feelings for Tsunade, maybe she can be his queen? Hoping to see more of this soon and maybe a update for "Naruto's a What?".
stingrey33 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Wow this is just the intro and it looks like its gona be an epic story. I can't wait to read more.
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