Reviews for tracy beaker returns the future SYOC
L'Amour veritable chapter 14 . 4/11
Full name: Lucia Katharine Green

Age: 10

Gender: female

Personality: Lucia keeps to herself either in her room or alone in the attic. She is thought to be stuck up by the other kids but is secretive about her past. She is arty and clever but has no friends at the dumping ground. She privately likes being alone and prefers it to the company of others. She is quiet and rarely speaks or smiles.

Apperance: Long light brown straight hair and dark brown eyes. She is medium sized with slightly tanned skin but no freckles. She always wears hoodies and jeans except for school.

Family: Mum: Caitlin Hereford
Dad: Eric Green
Younger sister: Eve Green (5)
Brothers: Seth Green (16), David Green (19)

Past: Her dad was long gone to drink and drugs even before Eve was born. He left when Eve was 2 and shortly after her mum was raped and died, both Lucia and her brothers witnessed this. Seth got involved with gangs and David joined the army leaving the two girls alone so they were taken into care.

Likes: Art, Painting, Being by herself, music, school, chips

Dislikes: intruders, gangs, nosy people, ice cream, spiders

Biggest secret: nearly killing her dad by pushing him off the roof

Anything else:
tribute24ella chapter 14 . 2/24
gr8
Rachael chapter 11 . 12/7/2013
Character suggestion:

Full name: Skye Chloe Cobblestone
Age: 10
Gender: Girl
Personality: Skye is a very lively character, who easily makes friends. She has a soft toy cat called Pablo, who she carries round with her everywhere.
Appearance: Skye has brown hair and sky-blue eyes (how she got her name). She nearly always wears a dark blue dress, with with a blue dragonfly necklace, a blue Indian-style bracelet, some dangly leaf earrings, and a blue flower in her hair (which is always in a ponytail).
Family: Skye used to live with her mum, Amber Cobblestone, and her dad, Mike Cobblestone.
Likes:
Colour: Blue
Flower: Snowdrop
Song: Titanium
Animal: Tiger
Hobbies: Playing the piano, dancing, drawing, writing stories, running, tree climbing, swimming.
Dance: Waltz and Cha Cha Cha
Dislikes: People stealing Pablo, being left on her own for a long time.
Biggest secret: Since Skye went into care, she has told people about her past, and so doesn't really have any secrets anymore.
Past: Skye's parents were killed in a car crash when she was 9, but she was left to live on her own for a year (as the police didn't know she existed). She found out that her parents were dead by watching the news. She was only discovered when she broke her arm falling down the stairs (exactly a year after her parents had died), and was sent to Elm Tree House.

Please include Skye in the story. I hope you like her! :-D
Guest chapter 14 . 10/10/2013
Please can you update? :)
Guest chapter 14 . 6/23/2013
Cool another chapter pizazz
Guest chapter 11 . 6/23/2013
Name- scarlet cone
Age-10
Gender-female
Personality-shy,cute,friendly
Appearance-long wavy brown hair, white skin.
Family-mum,dad,sisters,brothers,stepmom,step siblings
Past-didnt like it when dad married 2 women although the two women got on she didnt like one of her step sisters who tried to be really friendly and looked as if she was stalking her..
Likes- reading,tee,pink
Biggest secret-likes one of her foster brothers
Dislikes-a huge family
Guest chapter 14 . 5/22/2013
I dun like it
The Jesteress chapter 13 . 4/10/2013
whens the next chapter coming, or do you need more OCs?
TheDumpingGroundStories chapter 14 . 3/28/2013
Am I late for the Character thingy?
If not, here's my character:

Full name: Sophie Mae Voyle

Age: 9

Gender: Girl

Personality: Funny, kind, shy, sweet, arty, neat, sometimes hurtful, tells on people a lot!

Appearance: Long wavy blond hair, blue eyes, small pink lips, rosy red cheeks.

Family: Lucy Voyle(Mum), Jack Voyle(Dad), Bethan Voyle(Sister-10)

Past: Her mum had let her down when Lucy and Jack had split up, leaving poor old Sophie to go into care, while Bethan lives a better life with a mother.

Likes: Dolls, FOOD, toys, friends, drawing, ballet.

Dislikes: Creepy stuff, mean people.

Biggest secret: Pushed mother out of a second story window

Anything else: Nope! :D
The Jesteress chapter 14 . 3/9/2013
Ok forgot to mention, Ethan will probably be the oldest. He's allergic to nuts as well. If you want Cora to make an appearence, thats fine! :)
The Jesteress chapter 11 . 3/9/2013
Full name: Xanthe (pronounced Zanthee) Jade Black

Age: 13

Gender: female

Personality: Cool as a cucumber! Always has some sort of quick comment up her sleeve. Up for anything and loves causing trouble. She is too clever for her own good. She's a bit untrusting of anyone new whci means she took a while to get along with the others at the DG

Apperance: Shoulder length straight platinum blonde hair and pewter grey eyes. high cheeckbones and small lips.

Family: Her father, Christian Black, her brother Ethan Black who is also at Elm Tree. Secret sister Cora.

Past: Her mum died when she was 7 and her dad had a hard time coping. He would often leave for long periods of time without warning and the three kids would be left alone. Xanthe got angry and violent towards people and in school so her teachers paid a house visit when she was 10 and found out about their dad leaving so much, the longest period of time being 2 months. Ethan was always keeping the peace, but just as the teachers were calling social services, she pushed her little sister Cora down the stairs in one of her rages. she broke a rib and an arm and social services decided that Cora should be sent to a different home to Ethan and Xanthe. They never talk about Cora to anyone. Their first care home they didnt get on so after a year and a half, they movede to Elm Tree.

Likes: Mischeif, music, karate

Dislikes: being alone, social services, small trains (irrational phobia, dont know why)

Biggest secret: She has a little sister Cora who she pushed down the stairs

Anything else: She will sometimes have angry outbursts and go raging around if something triggers it. She went to anger management and therapy for two years. Cora has platinum blonde hair and dark brown, almost black eyes.

And her brother!

Full name: Ethan John Black

Age: 14 1/2

Gender: male

Personality: Quiet and closed. He's friendly and a natural leader, but tends to keep very quiet about anything personal. He rarley gets angry and can easily settle arguments. He is very creative.

Apperance: Sandy brown hair, pewter grey eyes, same face as Xanthe, but bigger lips.

Family: Dad, Christian, sisters Xanthe and Cora

Past: Same as Xanthe, but he was beat up at their last care home.

Likes: Reading, Elm Tree, animals

Dislikes: Loud, fighting, being alone

Biggest secret: He is allowed to visit Cora occasionally, but cant tell Xanthe.

Anything else: Nope!
TwilightRose88 chapter 11 . 3/3/2013
Summer Rosewood is 14 years old a girl.
She is kind and caring but can get quite annoyed she is like electra but can be more kind
she has dark brown hair with pinky purple tips and green eyes average height
family:she has a sister called Savannah her mum and dad got killed in a car crash
past: she has been in four care homes and three foster homes and had been councilled for her anger problems and sent to youth detention center for a year when she was 13
she loves movies and her sister
hates goody goodys and wasps
secret: she got stabbed
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
If you had read the terms and conditions, you would have noticed that these kind of FanFictions are not allowed. Just some advice:)
Dude-in-the-cool-hat chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
Thanks ths was ace update soon
94tr chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
Awesomness is everything
74 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »