Reviews for Harry Potter & the Shadow Lord
Currahee506 chapter 2 . 6/12
Ok why post these here and not the story?
Arthorius chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
yourfanfiction dot com is listed as not being there.
EmperorDraco7 chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
Wow, no story in this one either.
marcus nightfire chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Love your story Will there be more
wingedangel791 chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
ok then... off I go to try to find your stories! Have fun writing!
Blood Brandy chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I think we should start e-mailing the admins to try and get the MA rating returned, if enough of us ask, they might listen.
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I really want to know where this one ends up
lindon2 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
2 good sites to post and read fics are and
xxxflobreeziexxx chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
well i love the edited and improved version it's nice, BUT i can't believe you imprisoned me, hah my name is Flora, so i found it rather funny. i hope everything in your family life goes okay, update when you can.
Chiko Kudo chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Lily Potter- secondary soul fragment in Harry's scar that is given a new body with a recovered Sorcerros stone.

Ginny Weasley- deranged woman even crazier then Bella Laztrange bent on eliminating anyone who has gotten in her way of becoming lady potter.

Dumbledore- go on the run and become the next dark lord to the public eye as he tries to gather followers to overtake the magical world claiming it for the greater good nonsense.

Narcissa- stay as Lady Malfoy after Harry takes control of said house.
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Good intro

Please continue
hackmaster1992 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
ok i'm going to say this right now. YOU ROCK! i read a lot of stories but yours are some of the best, so i beg you please update this particular story. i was a fan of the first version and i would like to see this one continued.

yours truly,

hackmaster1992
Dark Hearted Dragon's Master chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Well I would say there are several things you could do. One would be like you had in the other story, have her show up with a new identity because of Dumbels. Another idea is the slave context, but an idea would be selling her off and having her obliviated, but as either Nott or even as either Crabbe or Goyle but that is stretching it a bit.

Now I like the idea of Hermione's mom but what are you going to do about Hermione is she going to be in it as well? You had a very plausible reason for him to leave int he first story. Him leaving allows for several other things that could happen in the future.

I would say in the same fight, both Voldie and Dumbles kill each other off. I don't like an Albus that mysteriously comes back from Azkhaban. Now that I think about it though, I have never read one that simply has Voldie going to jail.

Narcissa on the other hand could do the whole 'Consort Bond idea', or she could do the Black. It just doesn't fit well for her to become Lady Black. I have always thought of Daphne as the PERFECT Lady Black. But that is just me, lol.

I however do have the question of what the hell Shroud did to him. Is she evil or is she trying to set things right?
PurpleBullet chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I really like this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
cdog21 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
The premise caught my attention, so I decided to check it out. Unfortunately, while the idea of the story is interesting, I can't stand character bashing so I'm done.

Wish you the best of luck though.
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