|Reviews for The King Reign Lives On|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10
So far the story seems good, not too similar and not too different from the original storyline of Arisa. Not bad! Also, love Kiyomi's character.
One thing I've always wondered about Arisa though, not sure if you can answer it or not:
CAUTION! SPOILERS AHEAD!
With everything that Midori did to the class as the King, giving out traitor cards and driving the reciever to the point of suicide, as we see with Shizuka and Arisa, how come none of the kids given the traitor card ever went off the deep end and gunned down the whole class? If they're driven to the point of suicide it's not too hard of a stretch to see that happening as well.
| yukitaharada chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
"...our lips touched." Please, write more chapters! PLEASE!
| yukitaharada chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
Once again, I loved it! )
| yukitaharada chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMIGOSH! I LOVED IT! I'll read the next chapter asap!
| Mimi123 chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Wow! I think it is amazing! Hope that you can keep on writing! :)
| InvisibleeInk chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
NO! I wanted TsubasaxManabe! Who cares,it's your story :)
I thought this chapter was a bit short but it's fine. Keep on writing!
| InvisibleeInk chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Manabe Kiyomi O.O
I really wish her mom was Tsubasa, I always loved that couple. But this chapter was absolutely spiffing. I liked the detail in this story.
Just some concrit, but when a different person speaks you make a new paragraph like,
"You like her?" Raiden said in a stunned voice. I nodded.
"Kiyomi-sama?" Is that you?" Akiho, the family maid called.
"Yes Akiho. I brough a friend with me. We'll be in my room."
And so on. But it was very nice.
| Aqua2341 chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
Wow, great story! I'm really surprised that Tsubasa has changed a lot from when she was a teen. Before she was a swearing person, and now she's nice and gentle. Awesome work!
| Kuro Tenshi Hime chapter 3 . 3/31/2012
-sigh- always the bestie or the boyfriend nee~? But actually part of it created a cool plot twist because I suspected Haru cuz of he was Kiyomi's boyfriend like Midori in the manga but I never would have guessed about Himeko! Σ（・・；）Lol.. anyway I almost died from laughter when ou mentioned that part about Tsubasa possibly being her real mother instead of Arisa ( or should I say Asami?) Ｏ（）Ｏ and then the ENDING! -fangirl squeal- *:.｡. o()o .｡.:* Anyway, great chapter! xD
| Kuro Tenshi Hime chapter 2 . 3/30/2012
Whoa. AMAZING. I gotta say though, when I saw that her name was Manabe Kiyomi I flipped out cuz I thought Manabe and Tsubasa were her parents. And I though it was Tsubasa cuz I was kinda hoping for that pairing and just how Kiyomi's personality is and all and then Manabe cuz it was the last name. (little disappointed ;-; but it's a small thing for me on whether it's Tsubasa or Arisa right now). Anyway- zomg the suspense kills me everytime which is why I'm dying inside everytime I finish a new chapter of ARISA- which was actually a bit similar to how I felt when I read this last chapter xD
Anyway, I hope you can come up with something as to who the king could be. Gambatte!