|Reviews for The King Reign Lives On|
| yukitaharada chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
"...our lips touched." Please, write more chapters! PLEASE!
| yukitaharada chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
Once again, I loved it! )
| yukitaharada chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMIGOSH! I LOVED IT! I'll read the next chapter asap!
| Mimi123 chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
Wow! I think it is amazing! Hope that you can keep on writing! :)
| InvisibleeInk chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
NO! I wanted TsubasaxManabe! Who cares,it's your story :)
I thought this chapter was a bit short but it's fine. Keep on writing!
| InvisibleeInk chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Manabe Kiyomi O.O
I really wish her mom was Tsubasa, I always loved that couple. But this chapter was absolutely spiffing. I liked the detail in this story.
Just some concrit, but when a different person speaks you make a new paragraph like,
"You like her?" Raiden said in a stunned voice. I nodded.
"Kiyomi-sama?" Is that you?" Akiho, the family maid called.
"Yes Akiho. I brough a friend with me. We'll be in my room."
And so on. But it was very nice.
| Aqua2341 chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
Wow, great story! I'm really surprised that Tsubasa has changed a lot from when she was a teen. Before she was a swearing person, and now she's nice and gentle. Awesome work!
| Kuro Tenshi Hime chapter 3 . 3/31/2012
-sigh- always the bestie or the boyfriend nee? But actually part of it created a cool plot twist because I suspected Haru cuz of he was Kiyomi's boyfriend like Midori in the manga but I never would have guessed about Himeko! Σ（・・；）Lol.. anyway I almost died from laughter when ou mentioned that part about Tsubasa possibly being her real mother instead of Arisa ( or should I say Asami?) Ｏ（）Ｏ and then the ENDING! -fangirl squeal- *:.｡. o()o .｡.:* Anyway, great chapter! xD
| Kuro Tenshi Hime chapter 2 . 3/30/2012
Whoa. AMAZING. I gotta say though, when I saw that her name was Manabe Kiyomi I flipped out cuz I thought Manabe and Tsubasa were her parents. And I though it was Tsubasa cuz I was kinda hoping for that pairing and just how Kiyomi's personality is and all and then Manabe cuz it was the last name. (little disappointed ;-; but it's a small thing for me on whether it's Tsubasa or Arisa right now). Anyway- zomg the suspense kills me everytime which is why I'm dying inside everytime I finish a new chapter of ARISA- which was actually a bit similar to how I felt when I read this last chapter xD
Anyway, I hope you can come up with something as to who the king could be. Gambatte!