Reviews for Too Close For Comfort
EnderDragon21 chapter 4 . 2/10
Right now, like, you don't even know how amazing this is.
Ahem... Anyway I really like how you made them, like, not OOC. At all. It's really good. And poor Danny... I thought Vlad was joking when he said that he told Danny's parents that the boy ran away! And then I was all like "wait he's not joking... Oh. /oh/."
Anyway... Can't wait for the update! But please don't Rush!
EnderDragon21 chapter 3 . 2/10
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EnderDragon21 chapter 2 . 2/10
I luv u btw
That enDING
EnderDragon21 chapter 1 . 2/10
Wildrop chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
This is absolutely adorable. Thank you for the story!
taylovesbevin chapter 4 . 5/26/2014
once again at the part Vlad was saying about him running away BREAK DOWN from Danny 2 make Vlad feel bad! And u should have had Vlad hurt Danny in training by accident. And Vlad ur plan in making Danny want 2 stay by ur said is EVIL he won't leave his friends and family 4 U! Amity Park NEEDS Danny Phantom! And again AWESOME CHAPPIE! UPDATE SOON! And don't leave Danny the town,Sam,Tucker,Jazz,and ur mom and dad need u and Danny Phantom! Plus... remeber Dan Phantom! U don't want that 2 happen... right?
taylovesbevin chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
dang it! Once again u should have had Danny start crying or showing pure fear of Vlad in his eyes and make Vlad feel Extreamly regretful and guilty about doing that! Once again thought AWESOME CHAPIE!
taylovesbevin chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
dang it !u should have had Vlad hurt Danny really bad and then have Vlad really guilty about doing this. Or have Danny refuse the bet and break down crying saying things like whats the point in racing u! Ur only going 2 cheat,hurt me, and win! So why don't u just start beating me now Vlad!? It would have been soooo much cooler. But still awesome Chapter!
S.S. Pie chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
LOL Talk about awkward! These type of tight situations (pun intended) just put a stitch in my side cause I laugh so hard. Good job!
Ruby 1334 chapter 4 . 4/9/2014
I really enjoyed this chapter! Alot things have happened!
Yeah, Danny has softened up quite fast, hasn't he?

We always knew what Vlad wanted...
A Evil apprentice...
And, he might just get one! XD
Slowly, but surely...Slowly but surely.

Please update this soon!
Ruby 1334 chapter 3 . 4/9/2014
That soap bit was quite built up! It was very entertaining to read!
I love how this story is going and CAN'T WAIT to read more! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 2 . 4/9/2014
Like, I totally KNEW Vlad was gonna win..
I never thought about the rules all too much..
And when he explained...
Man, he's smart isn't he?
Awesome idea! I L.O.V.E.D it! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Just... what Vlad said last...
and Danny's reactions... XD
Gold humor...
You totally made me LOL! :D
I can't wait to see what else is in store for me to read next! :D
To the next chapter I go!
Nimrod The Writer chapter 4 . 3/27/2014
Man, this is so perfect. I'm honestly trying to think up some advice to help you improve, but I've got nuthin. Your writing is so fluid! The pace of the story is perfect and so are the characters! I sat here and grinned from ear to ear the entire time while reading, and frequently re-read a number of scenes. Definitely going in my list of favorites. Man, I hope you finish this. Someday. If you want. No pressure. All the pressure. But seriously, no pressure. ...all the pressure.

Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
This is getting to be a good story but it hasn't been updated in a while. But then I'm guilty of that too so yeah. Please update as soon as you possibly can. Please?
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