Reviews for Continual Activation
jj chapter 1 . 3/21
love it
Penderghast chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
Such a well-written and engaging character study of both Bulma and Vegata. You adapted the source material so very faithfully while still managing to make it your own in terms of style and prose. I loved it from start to finish and I now look forward to devouring the rest of your body of work as soon as possible!
nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
You do the writing of Vegeta and Bulma so much justice. Your take on them is so spot on. It's insane and amazing how much you understand them. The writing itself is flawless. You're an incredible writer. The story is amazing and everything I needed. Bulma's understanding of all things Vegeta is just incredibly touching. I love that she knows when not to push and when to call Vegeta out on his shit. They're both so perfect in all their imperfections, as a couple and as individuals. Also, Bulma holding little Trunks gives me life. Imagining all three of them on the floor... it's a beautiful picture.
Mars chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
So the question for vegeta is: is trunks, Bulma, super seiyan worth his loses? I think that at this point the answer is no.
I'm sure he thinks he could've obtained super seiyan status regardless.
Prl16 chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Very nice :)
Lady Lan chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
I love this oneshot to pieces. You said so much in so few words, and it's definitely one of those stories that I'll be mulling over all day. On-point characterization, realistic dialogue, and I adore the way B and V move about one another. Especially Vegeta's reaction to Bulma's dream, and the effortless way Bulma's slipped into motherhood, and - mostly - Bulma's realization that she's got Frieza to thank for how her life's turned out. I hadn't thought of it that way, and it's really lovely.

Thanks for sharing!
Mallie-3 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
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LeChick chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Oh if I had remember you'd written this piece of sorely underrated excellence I wouldn't have been so surprised by your newer works.
Silver Skies - Red Lakes chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
This is amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Cute :3
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
"I just survived one death sentence and now you're forcing me into another? You're a woman; aren't you supposed to be nurturing, supplicating my every whim, submitting to me as your superior?" He follows her down the stairs, silent as anything, but a solid presence at her back.

Frieza may have been the catalyst, but she's living the fallout. She'll take it from here, with or without thanks.


"I see," Vegeta grunts.

As if he's saying, perfect.- There are very few people who write a believable Vegeta/Bulma, you do. This is masterful and just amazing. I LOVE the beginning with Bulma dreaming of killing Frieza, this whole thing was so very interesting. :D

Thank you for reminding me why they were always my favorite couple on DBZ.
UrieNanashi chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Wow I don't think I have seen a better more realistic portrayal of the two then this. It's fantastic and reaches into the reality and depth of the characters. I have always loved these two- so thank you for such a beautiful piece.
XDarkAngelOfLoveX chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Love it!
YellowShoes chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
This is so wonderful! Very in-character. I can see this happening within the DBZ series. I do hope you write more beautiful stories soon.
LittleMissV chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
You have such a wonderfully written story here - your characters are flawlessly in-character and the whole story flows well. What's even better - it's believable! Please keep up the good work and I hope you write something more soon.
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