Reviews for Happiness Lost
jessie 33 chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
Sad but sweet story, I enjoyed reading it. I am glad she said she would marry Paul he is a nice man, and he obviously loves her.
jessie 33 chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Jose is a jerk how could he not comfort her after the news she got. Paul seems like a great guy maybe he can be there for her.
jessie 33 chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
Poor Holly I don't blame her for reacting that way it was a shock. I can't wait to read what happens next.
jessie 33 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Great start to your story, I felt bad that Holly got the letter stating her brother was killed in a jeep accident. :(
loveandaudrey chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
Great chapter! Lovelovelove :)
Kristen3 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
*melt* Oh, God. I knew the ending would be worth it, and of course I was right! I must admit that this last scene sounds like it could be put into another story, w/ another couple...but I'm sure you've thought of that, too. Or at least I hope you have! ;)
Kristen3 chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
OK, well, I can't say I'm really a fan of Jose here, but I'm glad Paul is around. Yeah, I can tell this is going to be good! You know I love your endings! :)
Kristen3 chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
Well, this wasn't exactly the scene I had pictured coming next, but I LOVE the last line! :) Looking forward to reading the rest!
Kristen3 chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Not having seen this movie (*hides*), I can't really comment on whether or not this is in-character. But knowing this wonderful author, and the usual path that these stories take, I can tell there's melt-worthy stuff coming! Yay! :)