|Reviews for Infinite DCU: Flash|
| Kyer chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
I'm sorry, but I couldn't get past how someone as intelligent as Barry didn't survive the bomb. It would only have destroyed roughly nine square miles...or about 4.5 miles from the center. So all Barry had to do was run five miles in one second to escape the blast. Piece of cake for him, especially if he threw Cold into a barren patch of wilderness while going full tilt and immediately turned at an angle which would have kept most of his speed up.
Yeah, I know. Comic books were never logical to begin with. Still...it seems kind of off.
| KryptoKin chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
| RivalsAreAllies chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Good work and writing so far.
I will have to catch-up on this story at a later time, however, because, unfortunately, I'm behind on my own FanFiction. ...But, rest assured, that I will finish this great story.
There were a few grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted from the flow of the story.
I enjoy your concise and clear writing style. It gets the point across, without to much overhang.
Keep up the good work