|Reviews for In The Darkness, There Was A Ragged Cough|
| zen4365 chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Why?! Why did you do this to me?! It was great writing...but I cant stop crying! My Canada! He is dead!
| Dragonfire78 chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
I am in freaking tears! I do not cry and yet I'm a mess after reading this! I have to admit though this was very well written! Amazing job!
| divpotterdemitributebender chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
I am fucking crying from this. That was brutal... but very well written. I congratulate you on your amazing writing abilities, though I wish I could have heard more from Italy in this. I would like to hear what he had to say about this, and knowing him he would most likely try to cheer everyone up. You created a fantastic mood, the tone was just right. Good job!
| Akiros chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
The emotions were conveyed very well. But it's so sad! Canada was covering up for someone, probably Italy. So sad... I still don't really understand the sickness though... Still a wonderfully written story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
It was Italy, wasn't it? Canada, that poor dear, just didn't want someone else to die. Or maybe he was tired. Just wanted to die himself. Sequel?
| MIra Saito Okeda chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
...this has to be one of the best yet saddest stories i have ever read...it is amazing and i think imma share it with some of my friends...
| ERR0R C0DE 404 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
nonononono sobs and cries
Oh no, poor Gilbert and Matthew and ahh, that was honestly so heart wrenching.
Sad as it was, it was also amazingly written.
| The Genesis Riddle chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
This was very very scarey.
| anon chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
SCREAMING AND CRYING SCREAMING AND CRYING SCREAMING AND CRYING CURLED UP IN A BALL ON THE FLOOR MORE SCREAMING AND CRYING
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
i cried at the end
| colliding-colors chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Well you successfully made me start crying. Not just like one tear but several pouring over and close to sobbing. I got concerned looks from my mom and sister, so all in all, good job.
This should have a sequel and if you make one you can have as many virtual hugs as you want!
| Evil Lemon Demon chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Wow! That was awesome! Hope you make a sequel. :)
| Me chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
... That was really good. Really good.
| Nikki chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Italy definitely thats why he was so silent :D
| muShIii chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
oh my god, they killed Matthew!
But I the idea and your style :)