Reviews for Harry Potter: the Boy Who Now is a Pony
trooperjoker chapter 11 . 7/15
i am curious about what ginny's cutie mark is? From what i had read so far ginny's cutie mark was never described. Is it the same as ron's?
MisstressofAwesomeness chapter 21 . 5/15
MisstressofAwesomeness chapter 14 . 5/14
Guest chapter 21 . 4/30
Roughly written, but fun nonetheless.
God of the Challenge chapter 16 . 3/23
aww, you took out the lyrics. Why would you do that? Lyrics make the story entertaining. Great story though.
God of the Challenge chapter 13 . 1/12
That's what I like about prisoners, they hate abuse as much as everyone else (Assuming what you say about them is true).
SukiPhantomhive chapter 5 . 1/7
Mummy...Johnny brought a gun to school
He told his friends that it was cool
And when he pulled the trigger back
It shot with a great crack
Mummy I was a good girl
I did what I was told
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold
But mummy when I went to school that day, I never said goodbye
I'm sorry mummy I had to go, but mommy please don't cry
When Johnny shot the gun he hit me and another
And all because he got the gun from his older brother
Mummy please tell daddy that I love him very much
And please tell Chris, my boyfriend, that it wasn't just a crush
And tell my little sister that she is the only one now
And tell my dear sweet grandmother that I'll be waiting for her now
And tell my wonderful friends that they were always the best
Mummy I'm not the first I'm no better than the rest
Mummy tell my teachers I won't show up for class
And never to forget this and please don't let this pass
Mummy why'd it have to be me no one deserves this
Mummy warn the others, mummy I left without a kiss
And mummy tell the doctors I know they really did try
I think I even saw a doctor trying not to cry
Mummy I'm slowly dying with a bullet in my chest
But mummy please remember I'm in heaven with the rest
Mummy I ran as fast as I could when I heard that crack
Mummy listen to me if you would
I wanted to go to college
I wanted to try things that were new
I guess I'm not going with daddy
On that trip to the new zoo
I wanted to get married
I wanted to have a kid
I wanted to be an actress
Mummy I wanted to live
But mummy I must go now
The time is getting late
Mummy tell my Chris
I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date
I love you mummy I always have
I know you know it's true
Mummy all I wanted to say is "mummy I love you"
In memory of the Columbian students that were lost
Please if you would
Pass this around
I'd be happy if you could
Don't smash this on the ground
If you pass this on
Maybe people will cry
Just keep this in heart
For the people that didn't get to say "goodbye"
jeanette9a chapter 9 . 11/24/2014
between death eater and father there is a word that is missing an S. just to let you know.
Drake58 chapter 21 . 11/19/2014
that was wonderful story thank you i think pinkie pie should throw a party because it was great
ElementalMaster16 chapter 21 . 10/25/2014
Pretty cool fic!

LunaFluttershyAmelia chapter 5 . 10/23/2014
I believe it is called a yoke and is used to harness horses to ploughs.
gamelover41592 chapter 21 . 10/19/2014
as much as I hate bashing stories in harry potter works this was a good fanfic
Guest chapter 17 . 9/3/2014
It's ladybugs not ladybirds
Guest chapter 11 . 8/15/2014
I am too many for this!" whined Ron

Guest chapter 9 . 8/15/2014
More like Dum-dum-dum!

This is horribly written, the pacing is terrible, it has typos everywhere, and too many (inane author comments).

Still at least it's complete, and I am enjoying it despite its many many flaws.
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