Reviews for More than Halfway
umbrella0326 chapter 2 . 4/28/2015
Sometimes, I research works by writers I've read recently and came across this story. And, boy am I glad I did.

I absolutely love how you wrote this. Your flow and your conversations are sooooo smooth and I was caught up in this story. You nailed how you wanted me to feel and it was expertly done.

I also was impressed with passion. You use passion to set up a scene and then when THAT scene hits and becomes MORE passionate, it never becomes over-the-top and/or cheesy. It's impressive stuff!

thecandyvan chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
oh my fucking holy hell i just
why can't it be canon sobs
bella526 chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
Very sweet! I loved it. :)
Dear Mr. Granger chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Comepletly charming :)
iheartcsinewyork chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
Love love loved this!
TwilightEclps chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Melbi chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
That was amazing! Loved it :D
x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
awwwwwwws that was beautiful :)
midlifecrisses chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Oh yes! I want! Where is the petition for me to sign!
Musicfan24 chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Awesome job on this story! I thought it was really sweet.
silje24 chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Awww, beautiful! More please;)
Stranger 1993 chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Loved it! This was really really great. You did a fantastic job! (adding to my favorites)
LizzyPoodle chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Yay for happy endings! This was a yummy treat. :)
fluffhoof chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
This was really wonderful. Enjoyed it so much!
Spooky Bibi chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
That was adorable! I think you really captured the characters, their thoughts rang very true. I loved the part with Dave trying to reason that the song isn't for him, it was so like him.

I just loved all the fluffiness and playfulness at the end, it was a wonderful way to finish this. A sequel would be soooo nice to see... :D

Fantastic job, thanks for that lovely short story!
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