|Reviews for Pachinko Games|
| barbaratakuyaho chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
your story line is good (but I hated it) and your are very good with emotions.
| K9Lasko chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Delightfully dark. This story urges one to read closely, because there's a lot of twists and turns, changing view points and scattered thoughts. I loved it. Very sad to see Tony (relatively) physically well but mentally and emotionally absent. The last lines sum everything up. Awesome story. Thank you.
| MyShame7 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
I could barely read this but it was just so good I had to finish. I could never have borne the pain of writing this and I have no idea how you did! I think Gibbs might have put him out of his misery.
| sopmire chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Wow, heart breaking story, but I prefer it to everybody turns out fine ending. Great story
| WinifredONiel chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
The woods are lovely, dark and deep ... beautifully done. The imagery you used really lets the reader feel the desolation, the despair and the mind bouncing around like that little metal ball, crazily, desperately trying to escape the prison of the machine.
| guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
wow! very intense! almost cried at the end, very good! sequel?
| melraemorgan chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Seriously dark. But I liked it. Like the Pachenko analogy. Love the way you portray Gibbs and Tony's interactions.
| MalB chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Oh wow. Great last line. Really well done and sad, sad.
| DS2010 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
wondering what happened to my poor tony. looking forward to the next chapter
| angelscatie chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Poor Tony...hopefully, something changes and he gets better.
| Meilea2010 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
What the hell is going on with Tony? Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Oh my gosh, this is going to haunt me, this was so good and devastating, there are no words except to say I would love some more. I'm sorry this isn't more coherent I just want to say your writing is amazing.