|Reviews for Birthright|
| Piper1996 chapter 15 . 5/18
mind-tricking every doctor and clinician in the medcenter into believing that his recovery was complete and that they "should release him now," Lol Obi Wan does love mind tricks, of all sorts, doesn't he?
Aaah sobs He still will be a tragedy Even wich sadly has nothing to do with Obi Wan but everything to do with the fact that the jedi were unprepared to train someone who wasn't raised in their ways and Darth sidius.
Anakin freaking out when Obi Wan "formally" took the blame was adorable.
| Piper1996 chapter 14 . 5/18
aggressive negotiation, but i like that name it's rather funny. And Anakin attempting to fight too was very him. And Obi Wan coming at the last second to chop of the guys arm. Obi Wan likes to chop off people's limbs doesn't he?
And Obi Wan's dislike of medics medic droids is amusing. Loved Even telling him that one of them needed to show respect and obedience lol.
| Piper1996 chapter 13 . 5/18
Poor scared Anakin. And oooh boy Rhak'an is now using dark side of the force isnt he? Instead of his interesting use of both, almost.
| Piper1996 chapter 12 . 5/18
"Tell him yourself, Obi Van. I'm not a courier service." And the not griping...lol Obi Wan is rather young here still.
| Piper1996 chapter 11 . 5/18
Obi Wan wasn't sure what the proper diplomatic response to this insanity might be. Apparently he still had much to learn. Allways the diplomat.
Poor Anakin having to try and feel for his master and feeling his pain.
| Piper1996 chapter 10 . 5/18
Your hospitality has been a rare pleasure...he thought it with a bow. Obi Wan is so cool. Lets just discuss it like civilised beings? Obi Wan asks that alot too.
| Piper1996 chapter 9 . 5/18
Mwahahaha Ok Obi Wan making them all fight each other like that was kinda funny. And Anakin piloting and spinning around while doing so is a given. Liked Even being compassionate about Anakin.
| Piper1996 chapter 8 . 5/18
Obi Wan will now have infinite patience to teach Anakin lol.
And Even talking to Anakin like this is fun. Love him saying he hates all this waiting there at the end.
| Piper1996 chapter 7 . 5/18
I just love manipulative Obi Wan. And Even reassuring, somewhat, Anakin is cool.
| Piper1996 chapter 6 . 5/18
Ha lobe Even threatening to just take the ship. Obi Wan's almost banter.
And Even being all yup you're Obi Wan's apprentice all right.
| Piper1996 chapter 5 . 5/18
Oh yes, I think that is quite clear," i just love how Obi Wan talks. And... how much of his fortress did he show Obi Wan. Lol i think you've been tricked.
| Piper1996 chapter 4 . 5/18
Huh, Anakin does come right? He's the type to stowaway on the ship and come help. Even though his doesn't have a lightsaber and can only do so much with the force right now. Although, Anakin seeme to learn from doing than from being taught in the temple.
| Piper1996 chapter 2 . 5/18
Ooh Anakin is going to freak and damand to do something and be angry and worried. Just general Anakin feels really :)
| Piper1996 chapter 1 . 5/18
Ooh boy. I knew when it said that whats his name killed the guy without touching him that he'd for some reason or another hunt a/the jedi.
Hope this doesn't end up to traumatizing for little Anakin. Hes what 10 or so? Maybe a couple years. But don't think he has his saber here does he?
| Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar chapter 15 . 12/21/2013
EXCELLENT. :) Loved this. lol Perfectly written in dialogue and wit and...loved it. :)