|Reviews for Otani's Surprise|
| PiNkBuN17 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Nice set up. Could do with more description.
| GreecexTurkey1289 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
This isn't long. What gave you that idea?
| TotalFangirl985782 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Oh my that's great! I can totally see this happening btw. Poor Otani!
| VVvvvvVV chapter 9 . 2/4/2013
This was a short and hilarious story, Thank you for sharing it with the world of FanFiction. Wheter there where any faults or not I didn't notice as I enjoyed it too much although I did kinda stop at the sex scene going. Where the F is the missing condom.. Because no condom leads to pregnancy in most cases.
| Kayla chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
| alex chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
did you say this was your first story? because i liked it ,it was awesome you should make more and if you have countinue making more
| sweetwithobsessions chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
XD aww good ending
| Den chapter 8 . 12/3/2012
You did great!
I really liked the way the story was progressing.
It was a bit short though xD
Keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2012
OMG OMG OMG UPDAAAATTEEE!
| usuihentai727 chapter 8 . 10/22/2012
CUTE! LOVE THE END! Please continue! :D
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/19/2012
| meghanmoo chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
You should do a prologue of their wedding that would be sweet
| Vongolafan16 chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
Ooh that was... Enticing i guess is what is called but anyways i think u should do one last chapter where its a time skip after college and that's when otani asks the PREGNANT koizumi to marry him XD. I WOULD SOOO LOVE THAT!
| yumiulrichlovers chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
I like your story and your lemon was good. keep up!
| Vongolafan16 chapter 7 . 10/20/2012
whoa otani he was quick on his feet this time O.O