Reviews for Otani's Surprise
miczka3 chapter 4 . 2/2
VisforVixen chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
PiNkBuN17 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Nice set up. Could do with more description.
GreecexTurkey1289 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
This isn't long. What gave you that idea?
TotalFangirl985782 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Oh my that's great! I can totally see this happening btw. Poor Otani!
MonkeyLotus chapter 9 . 2/4/2013
This was a short and hilarious story, Thank you for sharing it with the world of FanFiction. Wheter there where any faults or not I didn't notice as I enjoyed it too much although I did kinda stop at the sex scene going. Where the F is the missing condom.. Because no condom leads to pregnancy in most cases.
Kayla chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
alex chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
did you say this was your first story? because i liked it ,it was awesome you should make more and if you have countinue making more
sweetwithobsessions chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
XD aww good ending
Den chapter 8 . 12/3/2012
You did great!

I really liked the way the story was progressing.
It was a bit short though xD

Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2012
usuihentai727 chapter 8 . 10/22/2012
CUTE! LOVE THE END! Please continue! :D
Guest chapter 6 . 10/19/2012
Update soon!
meghanmoo chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
You should do a prologue of their wedding that would be sweet
Vongolafan16 chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
Ooh that was... Enticing i guess is what is called but anyways i think u should do one last chapter where its a time skip after college and that's when otani asks the PREGNANT koizumi to marry him XD. I WOULD SOOO LOVE THAT!
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