Reviews for A Day in the Mountains
max chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
this is a good start, hope you finish it.
RaySkywalker chapter 2 . 2/28/2016
Please finish!
Such a promising start!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
Wie geht es weiter...
Holly70sgirl chapter 2 . 9/4/2014
Please finish this story. It is really really good!
barcal chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Will you be putting a new chapter up soon?
ploring chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
You rock at dialogue!
ploring chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Wow! Wish I had paid attention that this was not complete! Has amazing potention. Hope you complete because I am hooked!
SaraiEsq chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Oh, my! And, this is on hold? :-(
llamaslobber chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
SO excited about this new episode! So far so great! You come up with some of the best twists and turns. :)
WifeTut51 chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Hey I think I recall a chick that worked for the FP actually setting fire by burning a love note a few year back, right?
Emom chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Oh no! Great update. Look forward to next chapter.
starlight guardian chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
And into the abyss . . . wow!
TheNaggingCube chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
! How could you do this! Hurry post chapter 3 right now.
Avirra chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
The boys don't exactly have an easy exit - and the only person that has an idea where they are just whacked a tree? This is definately shaping up for a nail biter.
Kelmin chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Not looking good (the situation, that is. The story is looking GREAT!)

Nice contrast between Johnny's "This was going to be FUN!" and the end of the chapter, where it's quite clear that this is NOT going to be fun.
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