|Reviews for The Mortal Sentinel|
| SuperDarkbolt chapter 29 . 12/26/2014
Beautiful tale, I can't find any words to describe it, Dragon Quest and Final Fantasy have always had incredible endings, I hope your next story is as good as this one!
| SuperDarkbolt chapter 17 . 12/23/2014
I really like your charecter development
| SuperDarkbolt chapter 12 . 12/21/2014
Still prety good, your charecters are remarkable, but I think you rushed the time too much, 16 days, really? Also your battle scenes are not very realistic
But I'm looking forward to the end, (I still haven't gotten past Corvus)
| SuperDarkbolt chapter 5 . 12/21/2014
Finally, someone who has written a good Dragon Quest fanfiction! So far that makes three...
You've done an excellent job so far, though you did make one mistake: It's dame, not dam, just one spelling mistake, color me impressed, I myself make many more than that. Beautiful story
| nightwriter212 chapter 16 . 6/8/2014
I love ur dragon quest 9 stories. their great !
| lolitathegoddessorca860 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
| BloodPrincess8 chapter 29 . 10/30/2013
Firstly I cannot believe I read this in all one day! :O second I was squealing in delight nearly every chapter since Connor and Zera were together! This easily makes my top 5 favourite stories! I was so surprised when Connor asked Zera to marry him I was so friggen happy :D This is so strange because Zera sounds like my name Sarah and I know a guy called Connor *le gasp* it was ment to be! Haha! Awww and i thought it was so cute when I read that the names of the children were Corvus and Aquila! I thought that this story wouldnt actually make it to the Corvus end fight.
| Daisy-Ree chapter 29 . 9/17/2013
YOU ARE TOO CRUEL D:
HOW CAN YOU END THE STORY?
| DuskWolf chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Very detailed! 3
| Noma9 chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Awwwww man. There is no way for Coffinwell not to be horribly depressing, is there? Good chapter though, I like that dramatic ending.
| Noma9 chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Connor has family in Coffinwell? I feel a depressing plot point coming up! Also, I'm really digging your characterization of the hero and her companions, even Aquila. Good job.
| mimi chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
hi. i read the entire mortal sentinel story and i really liked it and i kind want to read more from you. please keep writing stories! :D
| mimi chapter 29 . 2/16/2013
sweet! you finished!
| Princess Shahnaz chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
| Guest chapter 29 . 11/16/2012
Loved the story! It was amazing!