|Reviews for The Mist of Illusions|
| Kimpoedel chapter 1 . 6/27
Olaa an update , whiiii! :-)
I like the teasing betweem them. Lara is getting warmer for Kurt :D
Those little remarks of Kurtis are PERFECT for him.
And yeah ... Lara is being Lara :D!
Can't wait for the next update Xxxxx
| TR Kurtis Trent chapter 20 . 6/27
This is an amazing story so far
| Claire Sail chapter 19 . 4/18
ahhh the real Kurtis is back! And he's so much more pleasant haha. This is a great story. I can't wait to read more of Lara and the real Kurtis working together again. Don't wait too long to update! ;)
| Claire Sail chapter 18 . 4/18
Oh. My. God. I knew it!
| Claire Sail chapter 17 . 4/18
While reading this i can definitely sense something is "off" about Kurtis...
| Claire Sail chapter 16 . 4/18
Oh I love the description of the main hall. Very clever to have the torches cast her shadow in the shape of the LV symbol. And do I detect references to concept art in some of those texts? And the description for Eckhardt's pit - very chilling! You are a pro at this.
And what is Luther Rouzic up to? Can't wait to see where this goes!
| Claire Sail chapter 15 . 4/18
Zip and Lara's dialogues are some of the best parts of this story so far! I just love them bantering!
| Nemesis chapter 19 . 3/28
I just had to read your story from the start (yeah all 19 chapters) and I'm having so much fun with both Lara and Kurtis!
And, much as I hate to admit it, with Karel, that shapeshifting bastard as well! "Enough, mortals" is probably the best line ever said by a villain! Ever!
I also would like to thank you, as well as many writers here for the insiration I get to continue my own story... kinda trying to continue but seems hopeless... oh forget it...
Keep up the good work and please, please update soon!
| Josh14Raider chapter 19 . 3/28
Aha! A new chapter! :D The long awaited truth came out as to why Kurtis was acting like that earlier on in the story, great twist, for a second I thought it was the other way around until Lara actually spoke to him :P The way you wrote the fight between Karel and Kurtis was fantastic and dramatic, you showed both sides struggling against each other including Lara in the mix of the battle perfectly. It's also nice seeing Kurtis and Lara talk and interact to each other like that near the end of the chapter after all that has happened, you really captured that mood and atmosphere well despite the situation that they are in :P I really enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait to see how the pair will escape after being trapped in that enclosure, spectacular work as usual! :D
| Ana chapter 19 . 3/25
I'm smiling like an idiot now :) I love these two so much!
i'm completely in love with your story, please update soon!
(Sorry for any mistake, my English is not so good yet xD)
| Meldelen chapter 19 . 3/26
I enjoyed so much the action part! The fight with the two Kurtis is so apt, besides it was included and considered for the sequels, as we can read in Murti's notes! So thumbs up for that detail. I don't think an interrogation would be needed, tho, maybe by just asking them to show her their hands' palms would be enough to know who is Karel and who is Kurtis, since Karel's marked on the palm, and Kurtis isn't.
Anyway! It was a relief to know Kurtis wasn't Kurtis most of the time, tho I secretly hope he wasn't him when that argument. But now things are more or less settled up. Also the teasing was delicious despite I think Kurtis should be more daring with her! ;)
Oh, by the way, I loved Karel being progressively pissed off at the situation. I mean, when he said "Enough, mortals" I swear it sounded to me like he said "Enough, motherfuckers" or "Enough, bitches." Like can you please fuck off... Hahahaha. Don't mind me. I'm having my own fun here. ;D
As always, an enjoyable read! Keep up with the nice work! :D
| formlesscloud96 chapter 17 . 3/25
I loved this chapter so much, the interactions between Lara and Kurtis made me smile like a fool. Please update soon!
| Claire Sail chapter 13 . 3/25
Very good descriptions in this chapter! Loved it!
| Claire Sail chapter 11 . 3/25
Whoa what is with Kurtis? (or is it Karel...?) He's got like split personalities! Really hope there's a good reason for him to turn into a complete jerk this chapter. I'm with Lara, I wouldn't work with him like that.
| Claire Sail chapter 10 . 3/25
Oh man, I can't tell if this is Karel or Kurtis in this scene! He's acting so strange and backwards!