|Reviews for A Bond of Fire and Iron|
| evilpyro13 chapter 1 . 6/16
Love the story, it had nice long chapters and not a bad amount of them either at first i wasnt sure but once i started reading i ended up finishing the first 2 chapters and i was hooked i couldnt stop. It was amazing to read and i enjoyed the way you wrote it as someone said minor problems but they are easily overlooked, even with the minor problems im really impressed with the story it was full of action romance and andventure along with a bit of suspence and curiousity hidden in the mix. Not sure if your continuing it (hope you do) because when i was reading your story i felt as if it was an actual episode that was being played out in my mind you put alot of detail into the story and didnt leave anything that wasnt important out. Im looking forward to what you may do with this story, cant wait to see what will happen next best of luck if you continue ill be waiting to read if you do. Keep up the amazing work :).
| Antaxocide chapter 1 . 5/31
| animeman natsu chapter 24 . 3/26
I Fucking love this story please please right more
| Hiro21 chapter 12 . 3/16
Hisako just kill the mood reading this story...
Maybe because I don't like her role from this story..
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 1/23
Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/13/2016
Did Satan from Blue Exsorcist come and possess Natsu?
| Enryuo chapter 24 . 9/3/2016
I really love this story!
| Raging-D3mon chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
LMFAO! The Arrest charges had me dead! Elfman was arrested for lying about his manliness amd caught running from a cat...
| Ceridwyn the Chaste chapter 16 . 4/2/2016
I love your story, I hope you update soon. Aside from some mistakes that I can easily brush off, though you can use a beta (I really don't know why people are complaining that much, this fanfiction not a published novel which has one or two editors. There is bound to be some mistakes)
On another note, I am glad I am not the only one who dislikes Lucy. I really don't see her as a capable wizard. She relies to much on her magic and she is not capable of fighting on her own. I feel like Lucy is always hiding behind her spirits or making spirits do the work for her most of time (I can name so many episodes/chapters she has always done this) Although I still read the manga for the other more intresting characters I just get annoyed when I see her face (or rather most of time her nude body, breasts and panties *sighs*) I don't know if you have read or watched anymore after the 'Starry Sky' arc but recent episodes/chapters show how weak or really demotivated she is. For example: Instead of training to be stronger (which the entire guild did, except her) Lucy became a lingerie model instead of focusing on becoming a strong wizard ; While her friends are too busy trying to survive a war, she takes the time to know on what happened to her mother (yeah dude I get that but help your friends survive first then find your selfish answers later) ; She releases her enemy who tried to kill her thinking her enemy is not that 'bad' (also Aquarius saved her yet again because Lucy was outsmarted by said enemy and was going to die by suffocation) *more sighs*
I also hate the fact she constantly looks down upon Natsu's and Happy's level of intelligence but at least they get things done when she is always the damsel in distress (Erza knows how to save herself heck, Juvia knows how to handle danger heck even Wendy had to save Lucy once, Wendy! A small girl!)
Anyway I did love on episode she was in, it was the episode where Minerva tortured her (By the way Lucy did not have to participate in that battle it could have been Erza but of course disgusting fanservice)
Natsu deserves better than a girl who constantly looks down upon him and always shows too much skin that is enough to look like a prostitute (at least Yukino and Angel wore decend outfits in battle) Naza is the most healthy ship aside from Bisca/Alzack I've seen so far, they trust one another and work seamlessly together and Natsu does not need to worry about Erza getting into danger he knows that she is capable and formadible.
I apologise for my rant, it is just I am tired of seeing so much Nalu or OP Lucy (you can hardly find a decent fic without said ship or character) You and a very few others understand my pain.
I thank you for reading my review and keep up the good work and I shall await your next chapter.
| Jack68540 chapter 4 . 2/13/2016
loved it you made it sound like it was real and i could even saw natsu and erza hugging each other in my head while reading
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/9/2015
Good story but ... Why is Natsu so weak, I mean where is his Lightning Flame Dragon Mode or Dragon Force ( I know it needs Etherion ) but still.
| celestial star chapter 12 . 12/3/2015
why did hisako can see mavis!?isn't she don't have a fairytail mark?
| QrowUp chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
I've really been loving your stories, I just finished reading "The Digger and the Sniper" and all(so far) 24 chapters of this "series" I guess I should say. The dating system on this site seems to be a little wacky(sorry I'm new!) but I really do hope that you are still continuing not only this story but "The Digger and the Sniper"(and yes I'm aware that as of right know it's been about three and a half years since you wrote it). IN truth I would've sent this as a DM but new users have a twenty-four hour long wait period and I just couldn't wait any longer. To wrap this all up, continue the great work and PLEASE try to update this story more frequently, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Tess chapter 5 . 10/28/2015
| Tess chapter 2 . 10/28/2015
I like this chapter. It's action packed with a very small romantic partn.