Reviews for In the Hands of Fate
dollfacetwi-mom03 chapter 13 . 3/20/2012
Oh Charlie I love
maggiejoma chapter 13 . 3/20/2012
both Bella and Charlie need to learn to trust... what Jake did was unforgivable... but it was Jake who caused the pain,... not Edward...:)
elaine67 chapter 12 . 3/20/2012
snoopylover60 chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
So much happened in this chapter. I loved that he lifted in a Officer and a Gentleman hold... (Squeeeee!)

Then taking off to the mall and just hanging. Finding out that he is "rock star" loaded. This is going to be interesting.

The toast at the end. I really like "to all the soldiers.."

Very nice.

Looking forward to the next update. :)
ohtobeyoung chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
Feeling all warm and fuzzy now. Thanks.
maggiejoma chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
great glad he's back...:)
momma2fan chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
They are so cute. Can't wait for the next one.
dollfacetwi-mom03 chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
Oh they are do cute together so glad that he got there...
ERCommandoTwilight chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
Excellent chapter. I had an almost "Pretty Woman" moment when you described Edward's shopping spree. Another Richard Gere reference! I love a man who knows how to shop and respects quality merchandise. I hope you get this review and it gives you much needed happiness when FF is in utter fail.
the captains wife chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
Awww! I can't wait to read Bella's reaction!
ForeverAlwaysLove chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm really eager to read this and I love the idea. As an aspiring author I love the way that you keep me thinking about reading another chapter. Amazing keep it up 3

ERCommandoTwilight chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
I read this chapter early this morning and I am speechless. I am also going through withdrawals because there are too many hours in the day before I can read another chapter. Thanks for another amazing chapter!
LOLO 5-0 chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
OMG I know she would think the worst poor Bella,I can't wait for her reaction to him in person .
elaine67 chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
This should blow all her doubts away
ssbksmm chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
great chapter, more please :)
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