Reviews for The First Bite
Fenrisulven13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013

Interesting "ship" I liked it and it was funny!
Anna Elisa chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I Like ;)
capostrophe chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
*Long overdue review*. That was so good! Loved all the description to do with the apple and Maddy's feelings about it...awesome Mapple there :D
Angelicbutterflies chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Hello! How are you! I like this story alot!
Miss Junie chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
"to shine in the afternoon light."

Ok, I'm not sure if you meant it or not, but I was laughing at all the possible innuendos in this one! Especially the last line ;)! Shiny fans forever! haha. Lovely piece!