|Reviews for The True Horror of Konoha (origenal)|
| monochrom68 chapter 12 . 5/17
I take it that Naruto has no dick anymore. I mean Dick is made of muscles or flesh whatever.
| monochrom68 chapter 1 . 5/17
what's the sense of making haku a female if you wouln't pair him off
| azarel0122 chapter 8 . 4/24
Zabuza covered in mussels lol. i keep imagining him coming out of the water with all sorts of random shellfish stuck on him
| azarel0122 chapter 3 . 4/23
its good but the SPELLING! spelling mistakes keep popping up just as i get into it. its so annoying
| ivanganev1992 chapter 19 . 4/23
I agree THAT IS MAYBE THE WORST OF THE WORST OUTCOME. AND IT COULD BE EVEN WAY WORSE.
EVEN THOUGH THAT THING DONE TO NARUTO IS LIKE THE NIGHTMARES OF THE LIVING DEAD BECAUSE NARUTO IS JUST GRUESOMELY SCARED TO INSANITY WITH DARK TWISTED MIND OF THE JOKER OF THE RIGHTFUL VENGEANCE AND MADNESS .
I HOPE THAT I WILL NEVER EVER , SEE THAT HOROR AND TORTURE OR I MIGHT BELIEVE THAT THE HELL IS MAYBE OR COMING IN THE EARTH OR REALITY,
| ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 4/22
Ch 4 BROKEN ,SLIGHTLY GRAZED WITH CRAPTON LIGHTLY SAID CHAKRA AND INSANE AS THE JOKER ,FLOWEY AND CHARA . DAGUR AND DRAGO BLOODVIST ARE TOO SANE , THE JOKER FITS AND
FROM UNDERTALE CHARA AND ASRIEL/FLOWEY .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 4/22
Ch 2 The Dead Eyes Sans lost tte hope turned into Neutrino/Pulsar .
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/4
*naruto not Mary (autocorrect)
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/4
I think this is a really great story, every time Mary to says something to make everyone sweat drop I am always laughing. I find it so funny :) keep up the good work
| Shika chapter 20 . 2/17
*Break, not brake.
| neo chapter 11 . 12/15/2016
pal you have given me some inspiration to write a fanfic because of you
| tacticalkyuubi chapter 2 . 8/1/2016
the all holy question... WHY THE ABSOLUTE FUCK DID THIS HAPPEN
| spidereye8 chapter 8 . 6/17/2016
when I go insane this is exactly how I want to act brilliant story
| Bombertank chapter 3 . 4/26/2016
Grammar needs to be checked. Minuet isn't right it's minute
| ok chapter 23 . 4/13/2016