Reviews for The True Horror of Konoha (origenal)
DarkSolaris57 chapter 23 . 2/25
I'm am so disappointed you stopped to rewrite. All i wanted was the angry minato chapter and you stopped to rewrite. I found this story endlessly amusing and greatly enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/17
You have proven my theory that insane people have pocket dimensions thank you
Guest chapter 7 . 2/15
Right now i can't get the idea of Naruto try to tree climb someone out of my head, then proceeding to blow them up, or in suigetu's case waterwalk on top of him.
PugTheMagician chapter 21 . 2/7
chapter 21. i like how you had naruto react to meeting minato, seems realistic considering how his life was. i was surprised that you had kyuubi interested in naruto. certainly his bloodline does have incredible potential and so does he without it but i didn't think he was really THAT powerful that he got her attention. on the other hand a demon would probably be the only kind of pairing with naruto in a story like this that made any kind of sense because pretty much everyone else would go nuts in a relationship with him. i wish could read more but all i can do is hope you return to the rewrite soon. just so you know, dyslexia or not (it hardly shows anyway), you are already one of my favorite authors and i look forward to seeing what your other stories are like
PugTheMagician chapter 20 . 2/7
chapter 20. portable parades, that would be a extremely deadly thing to fight against in a war, i like it. i am interested in the supposed bringing back the fourths soul that should be interesting. i also loved the way you had naruto mock orochimaru and he couldn't do anything about it.
PugTheMagician chapter 19 . 2/7
chapter 19. i loved the explanation of Naruto's seven deadly sin seals. i wonder what would be more effective against Orochimaru, greed or envy? i also like that you took the jashinist religion and made a seal based on them, i wonder whether Hidan would think naruto a follower of jashin or a heathen as a result? i also really liked the meet up with Ayame and Teuchi, especially them actually threatening him to eat ramen. the talk about Zabuza and Mei fucking each other was pretty funny. i am with naruto, i wanted to see the whole stadium do the funky chicken too. and lastly i liked the use of the blood clone to do the whole thing without taking a scratch
PugTheMagician chapter 18 . 2/7
chapter 18. i really liked the different fights of team 8, hinatas wasn't that different but the end was worth it. i like that you kept the water girls abilities hidden, makes for a more interesting fight later on. i also like that as a result of the fixed seal gaara wasn't as rough with lee as he was and didn't criple him. i really liked the seal narto used and how it worked. i wonder if we will see a seal for each sin or not. i also like your reason for not having the curse seal removed actually making sense. lastly i am curious about the water girls plans for naruto and look forward to how that goes in the rewrite
PugTheMagician chapter 17 . 2/6
chapter 17. i like how you dealt with the first exam. i've seen it done before but its still always funny to read. i also like that you cleared up why anko cuts off naruto's nuts and that it DOESN'T make her the pairing, too bad i was curious what kind of hell that union would create. i also like how you had naruto have his fun in the forest, he rarely ever gets to cut loose
PugTheMagician chapter 16 . 2/6
chapter 16. i like the running gag with naruto feering for his testicles, i'm thinking the pairing is either anko or tenten as a result (they both like sharp pointy things). i thought naruto's sad smile when asked if it was too late for him was a nice touch. and i loved the boys reaction when naruto essentially got a date with three hot chicks siply for being in the bingo book, that was priceless
PugTheMagician chapter 15 . 2/6
chapter 15. these inventions are amazing. the inuzuka one wasn't as inspired as the others but then again their fighting styles don't really use chakra much so no fancy chakra doohickeys for them. the suit for the nara clan was certainly interesting, i wonder if shikamaru will be able to use it by the chuunin exams, though i personally think it too dangerous for anyone but a master to use. the akimichis one was interesting. for the size it could grow to i don't see why naruto didn't just pump shitloads of chakra into it to test it out otherthan it wouldn't be a secret if a hokage monument sized iron ball suddenly appeared. the yamanaka one i actually expected, i expected some kind of weapon to increase range and speed of the shintenshun jutsu but the chakra arrows are a nice touch. i loved the bingo book entry, especially the picture description. you're right it certainly fits.
PugTheMagician chapter 14 . 2/6
chapter 14. i love that you had naruto react like that to drinking, especially the personalised messages on the back of the tutu's of team 7 boys and zabuza. i also like that you showed that reading an entire library comes in handy when naruto found that way to get zabuza and haku into konoha. i LOVE that you had naruto and anko meet this chapter and the resulting hokage monument facepaint and traps that resulted from their meeting and drinking. i especially liked the curious yondaime. above all i liked the initial meeting of the two with anko thinking naruto was broken
PugTheMagician chapter 13 . 2/6
chapter 13. parade of a thousand demons, why does that name sound so familiar to me? anyway i liked it, partly becuse you had the killer rabbit from monty python and the holy grail but mostly because of the 7 year old naruto walking smoothly through the sea of carnage. i dunno their is just something so incredibly creepy/scary about nursery lines and little kids when done just right
PugTheMagician chapter 12 . 2/6
chapter 12. i like that we finally got a look under naruto's bandages this chapter and it was suitably gruesome. i guess without cheeks it explains why he can smile so wide. i also liked sakuras reaction to finding out it was her own mother that orchestrated it, seems realistic. i also like that you had naruto vent for a bit. i wonder what he shifted into when he lost control? i also liked that haku was drawn towards the violin song naruto was playing considering her own sad past. i wonder how the bridge fight will go next chapter, whether this meeting will have any significance at all. and lastly i like that the wolves made an appearance towards the end, i had almost forgotten about them
Guest chapter 11 . 2/6
chapter 11. i really like the way you had naruto reminisce of his time with the higashi's, especially having tenten be the girl he saved beforehand. was that planned? i wonder about naruto's respect for women, did something happen to cause this or is it merely a ingrained thing with him? i also liked that naruto's only reason for keeping his identity secret was to make the clans squirm
PugTheMagician chapter 10 . 2/6
chapter 10. i like that you pointed out that a style like this could be perfect for a sharingan user, i hadn't thought of that. i also like that kakashi actually warned sasuke about the dangers of over reliance on the sharigan. lastly i like the rather unorthadox yet effective training method of continuous spinning
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