|Reviews for Alex POV|
| Gigi Girl chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Umm... 1st person to 3rd person to 1st person to 3rd person! Need I go on?
Good attempt I guess, but you really can try to do better
| nocturnaltibet chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Why did you change from First to Third Person? I would have liked it more had it stayed one or the other. There was no need for that. Sigh. Good attempt.