Reviews for Until You Believe
skrowley chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
You're a really great author! I loved Jily fics, they are the bestest. :) I read all of you other fics too and I really liked them I was just too lazy to write a review for each XD Happy writing! :)
DarkDaysDarkerNights chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
kwl story but wat bit james?
words-with-dragons chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
He has a one-track mind doesn't he? ) That was so sweet!
HermioneGirl96 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
This is a really good story! I love the way Lily and James aren't communicating well-that's so true to how relationships can actually go. And the romance is soooooo sweet without being overdone. There's just one thing I'd like to point out. You switch from third person to first person (Lily's voice) and then back toward the end of the story. The first person is just for one paragraph, but it kind of detracts from the flow of the narration. I do that all the time, too, when I'm writing, and I know how easy it is to make that slip, but I'd suggest you fix it. I hope this review doesn't make you sad. The story is great! :)
m0ckingbird77 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Hahah, that was awesome! :D He was sooo obstinate! She was too! Great story. :)
lazymornings chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
aww, really sweet :) nicely written :)