|Reviews for Rejected Romance|
| MeinGott chapter 13 . 10/18/2014
The ending is... Beautiful QuQ
| MeinGott chapter 7 . 10/17/2014
Woah, I never expected you to actually include rape :O
I'm impressed you handled it so well and not instantly make Kenny love him afterwards.
| CheckeredLove chapter 13 . 4/11/2014
I really enjoyed this story! I loved how the perspective was written and there was never a mistake with it! Very impressive! And of course the story was clever and very well written as well! I love how you portrayed Kevin and his parents. All in all, a very well done job! Bravo!
| RendeRage chapter 13 . 8/8/2012
To tell you the truth, i cried my fucking twisted heart out while i read this stuff. You're amazing, and i know (everybody knows) that the characters made fucking big mistakes but fuck, for so many lonely people it IS like this when you totally fallen for somebody. And that's natural that people can't understand it, doesn't matter that it's a brother or friend or what. And I don't really understand why is incest so 'disgusting'? it is, if there's rape just like the first time in this fic, but emotions are just emotions, you can't help it. Anyway, it's not what i wanted to tell you. Actually, this story is one of the best i've ever read, even the ending was okay, but it's a little hard to belive that there could be a happy ending. I woldn't be happy with a sad end (like suicidal, maybe) but it was just fucking PERFECT how you write the feelings and reactions. And my favorite thing was that you never wrote that it's happening with Kevin but 'you'.
finally, sorry for my english, it's still difficult for me, my bad.
And thank you so much for this stuff. It just fucking perfect
(no more f*ck i swear)
| La Ann chapter 13 . 6/24/2012
I'm going to be straight forward with you.
Okay, first off; I don't usually swing for stories like this. But I was so damn bored. Makes me feel really dirty in a bad way. Like hiding a porn stash. And I don't like incest.
And STILL I kept on reading. I must be twisted in some way.
But you write really well. Pretty much like painting a picture. Though I did catch a quite bit of mistakes, but I'm not going to point them out. And I actually like it that there is mistakes, reminds me that there's a real person writing.
You also seem to think through (Unlike I) what you write. I pretty much just pour my heart out like writing a diary. (Add laughter here and me cowering in embarassment.)
So all in all, I hope that you keep on writing and I hope that I didn't bring you down.
| bluestar fangirl little me 102 chapter 13 . 6/2/2012
I squeled and im like babysitting these kids and the looked at me like i was a alien or something but i locked my ipod and joined them in watching transformers prime and act like nothing happened hahaha they where still staring at me
I LOVED this SOO much thank you for wiirting this im to busy to write my self and i get writers block easyly but im trying to get chapter 2 or write a different story haha
| QLGingerBlade chapter 12 . 5/21/2012
Holy crap I cried. I love this story!
| bluestar fangirl little me 102 chapter 12 . 5/15/2012
your doing great on this story ! keep it up
im looking forward to it !
| LadyRaven-321 chapter 10 . 5/1/2012
I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the great work.
| 6747 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
that just wrong i mean he his brother what is wrong with you now i have to shoot myself(pulls out a 9mm pistol and aims at his own head)BANG...(blood all over his bed room wall as he falls to the ground with a thump)
| bluestar fangirl little me 102 chapter 7 . 4/20/2012
Why do people not review this and I love this you have to countie ! Please for the other people that read this its soo cute I almost cryed it is so beautiful *sniffles*
| Kaniii chapter 7 . 4/16/2012
Oh God~! Poor Kenny. ; n ; But also poor Kevin~! D: KENNY. WHY COULDN'T YOU HAVE ENJOYED IT? OR AT LEAST ACTED LIKE IT! n " Now Kevin feels all bad. :c God, this story is getting much more deliciously dramatic~! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Kaniii chapter 6 . 4/12/2012
Asdfghjkl! First off, you're welcome for the last review! I'm glad it made you smile! o u o Second, OHGOD. I mentally facepalmed myself wheb Kevin started asking all of the questions to Kenny! XD But, when Kenny asked him back about him kissing Kevin, dohoho, it was a different story. u" I'm really excited to see Kenny's reaction to the rape u I hope Tonya isn't right! Q A Q Can't wait for the next chapter! u "
| Kaniii chapter 5 . 4/6/2012
ASDFGHJKL. OKAY. First, WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE REVIEWS? This is like, amazing. ; A ; I feel so sorry for Kevin~! And Addison, THAT BITCH. I usually don't read Kenvin stories, let alone stories where Kenny is dating girls but, THIS. THIS. IOKJFRCOEJMLPCPJE. Is amazing. You really need to update this~! I love this story! I'm following it and adding it to my favorites~! C:
| dimediva23 chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
OMG! SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE. LOVE IT