Reviews for Under the Starlit Skies
ShinyBlackwolf chapter 1 . 1/24
Awwwww! That was so cute! Poor zenjirou though ;P
HERBIVORE MUNCH chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
The set up for this story was great, but the execution of the sentences and ideas fell short. I have a hard time believing that you are a native English speaker, and that's fine if you're not. The plot just didn't transfer as well as it could have. Great ideas though
Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Aww this was an adorable story! Such childish people you are, eh Taiki and Akari? XD Well they understood each other in the end which was good 8D

And the KiriNe interactions were perfect I have to say.

And Gengorou was awesome! Oh? No? It was Zenjirou then. XD Haha long live Zenjirou's fanbase, we're rooting for ya kid!
nyc2dragon chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Nice story. I think you did a good job for someone new at this.

I do feel bad for Zenjirou. I have been thinking the last week or so as a girl for him, how about Mizuki the sea tressure hunter? Taiki is already taken, so why not.