|Reviews for Insomnia|
| NYPD8433 chapter 18 . 1/31/2017
Really enjoyed reading this story - you've got a real talent for creating a gripping storyline as well as keeping everyone in character. I loved the cliff hangers at the end of each chapter and would happily read a whole book's worth of your story writing. It's a shame there was no ending to the story but I really enjoyed it.
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/30/2016
I'm very sad that there's not another chapter. I need an ending!
| gwyn chapter 18 . 1/19/2016
...just one more nudge to finish what you started! You're so close!
| TheProlificWriterGirl chapter 18 . 4/25/2015
This is SUCH an amazing story, but where the HECK have you been? I've missed your amazing story writing skills, please please please update soon!
| kitt chapter 18 . 5/8/2013
I've been reading your CSI story for the last week and I absolutely love it! Hope to see the (final?) chaper soon! Please don't abandon this story!
| CripticWolf chapter 18 . 2/1/2013
This story has been a blast. You are an amazingly talented writer and your characters are spot on. Thanks for the adventure so far! Looking forward to more :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/12/2013
Ok, seriously I do not want to wait any longer! Where is the next chapter? I don't think I'm the only one getting agrivated with having to wait. All of your other chapters have been great. We just want a good ending so we aren't guessing what happens next and can just know what happens.
| Aranna Undomiel chapter 18 . 12/28/2012
I nearly fell of my chair, when I saw that you had updated this great story :D Great chapter, loved the Don-Mac interaction in this one. And Danny got to be the hero...lol
Hope the next chapter will be up soon
| gwyn chapter 18 . 12/22/2012
Reread this chapter again! So exciting! You know what would be a lovely little xmas present...? Just, you know, if you have time.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Well where is chapter 19 getting tired of waiting just saying
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/22/2012
Great story, Mav.
How about the last chapter?
A little Mac suffering for christmas ;-)))
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/19/2012
well where is the rest of this one before you post the other one..
| Krishnaa chapter 18 . 11/23/2012
Happy thanks giving... thanks for the update...finally :D
Anyways, please write more soon... I was looking forward to more don whump, maybe next time!
| Mahala chapter 18 . 11/23/2012
Sorry that took longer than I expected but I needed to backtrack a little (must be getting old). Great action chapter, fast paced, vivid descriptions. Well written as always and worth the wait. Looking forward to the last chapter and a new fic? Yippee!
P.S. Mac the kitten? Aw cute! Wish I had one!
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/21/2012
Wow really good cant wait til next chapter and story.