|Reviews for A Sordid Tale of the Firelord and his Captain|
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
And Zuko is now mentally kicking himself. Crack. Funny crack.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
hahaha that's really funny! At first I thought it might of been Azula, but I think Mai writing them is really funny. lol
| Keyanna chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Amusing. And I liked seeing Ming again!
| Chouko Chango chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
OMG that's hilarious. I was fully expecting a heated or uncomfortable confession, not Zuko catching Mai writing about what he should have told her. Okay, so the uncomfrotable was totally there and I totally laughed.
This was really good.
| definatleynotafelineorcephalod chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
...I love you so much right now.
| Somariel chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
So if I'm interpreting the ending correctly, Mai and Ming are the ones writing the serial novel. That is *hilarious*.
| Lunatique chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
(dies laughing) Oh, this was *glorious.* Maiko and Jeeming (Jing?) FTW! Your prose has become a lot tighter and more focused, and the pacing was great. I was laughing nonstop at the turgid prose, and the twist at the end was brilliant. I also loved the clash between subversive feminine desire and mainstream respectability that's at the heart of much of fandom, and the clever way it was resolved. Great job!