Reviews for Substitution
Jade chapter 1 . 1/23
Soo good. -
AngryMexican chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Absolutely beautiful... You sir or ma'am, ARE FREAKING BRILLIANT!
xxTigerAvatarxx chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Fuckā€¦ That's some good fan fiction.. **drool**
Fumetsu Kaji chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
They must really love each other to be able to find something that would work for them.
Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
*bawls eyes out*

Friend: *shakes shoulder* Get a hold of yourself!

Me: *sniffs* B-But it's just so...s-so...

Friend: *raises eyebrow* So what?"

Me: SAD!

Friend: *face-palms*
GoingSunny chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Aaaaw its so sensual yet so sad :'( poor Al I feel like crying, good story though its very unique :)
rabid kuma chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
O.O So naughty! Yes!
LittleMonsterLover chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is fucken funny...srry
fullmetalLOVE03 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
it's my first time reading a elricest and as i read it it kinda feels weird to read's so perverted ! but though i think it's okay...
Storm Dryu chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This was HOT and AWESOME! I definitely wanna read more like this. But just a quick request. If you would, i really wanna see something more similar to this, only Ed is the one buying stuff and in a way, finds a method to give his brother the ability to feel using the steel body. also giving his brother a mechanical penis (hehe..that's from my dirty mind). But still, i loved how he was still Mechanical! anyways, i hope to read more from you soon! C ya!
Andomiyu Orokatta chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This is the first Elrcest story I've found that uses a penetrable toy. It was so hot! I really hope you keep writing Elricest 'cause you seem to have a good drasp of the dynamics of their relationship.
Kitsune-chan'w chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
lmfao eds a hore! i love this its awesome
Mangal2012 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
It's so sad that Al doesn't have his body in this! This story is really ummmm...well I don't want to say good cause then that means I approve of incest... The sex...ish scene was nice! Good job with that!
Scarlet Tigress chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
cute if porny, a stimulating combination...
Deadrose144 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Awesmw story! Your really good in writing elricest stories! You should do one where Alphonse has his body back ;) can't wait to read more of your stories! Xoxo