Hello, I don't speak English, but I will try with the help of Uncle Google. Your subject matter is really original and I salute you, it is very beautiful.

Hermione is beyond annoying... I'd have shut her down after the second day of trying to control my behavior. concern for my well-being does not equate to having a right to my every thought and emotion.

Okay, so... My brain is trying to process the innuendo filled instructions on how to "properly prepare ingredients"...

The heck? Snape KISSED HARRY? I didn’t sign up for Snarry!

Ugh, why does everything have to be a snarry, like this is my 5th time running into one in a row!

How on Earth did he landed on 7th year, a NEWT Potions which Snape, not Slughorn teaches? He didn't manage to got an O...
And so far, I hate Hermione almost as Snape now...Easy for her to say since she's not the one who's humiliated.

I have read many hundreds of stories. Hermione is more annoying and hex worthy here than even in jkr books. Quite an accomplishment

Well that was exciting. Also your note about emotions is really interesting. I'm going to have to think some more about that.

What the fuck just happened

Shit! That did not just happen!

I feel like my heart is tearing apart. I have tears in my eyes. Just thing of all the time pass that I would of wanted Harry & Sev to have been together after the war. I hope that you still have the rest of this story up & they get together.

Oh my goddddddd I want to pull my hair out he is being so unbearably frustratingly obtuse to the point of it being physically painful in the desire to strangle him at the raging stupidity and repetitive temper tantrums like a freaking 5 year old refusing to listen to ANYTHING anyone says being completley incapable of having a conversation despite being nearly a legal adult in the muggle world and ALREADY being an adult at 17 in the wizarding world. Im literally prepared to beg that he gets his head out of his ass and stops acting like an unstable child when it comes to Severus because I have no idea how any reasonably mature individual would or could even contemplate being intimate with someone who is actincothe way Harry has so far. He needs to deal with his shit desperately.
I love stories that make me feel something and provoke strong reactions so well done on that front I was just cursing up a storm and enarly chucked my tablet but please for the love of sanity let the future chapters show a hint of growing and maturityon Harrys end before I reach into the story and slap the hell out of him lol

Dear LHx,

Well...

I love/hate you.

You wrote the most beautiful things yet you left it in suspens as I am still very unclear of the endding.
So after a passionate night- Harry disappears ? And Snape is without memories for of that night?
What happens then? Won't they be together ? :(

I mean- dear lord. You drafted out beautiful and magnificently of the process of how Harry finnaly accepted everything and how their relationship grows.
So yeah- I felt it was a waste :c to leave it hanging.

I really really hope for a sequel.

And your love making chapter of Snape and Harry was wonderful- lol I hope I don't sound like a pevert. But I enjoyed it very much. It wasn't like too horny. I mean sure the heated up tension was there but what was importang was you managed to pull up and exposed the deep deep love between them. I loved that the most. There was like almost real emotions out of that. So I was very much impressed and still am of this story and enjoyed it very much, despite the endding.

Thank you for contributing to the Snarry World ! :)

stupid stupid Harry

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...x.
really, a whole chappie dedicated to x.
well, i look forward to reading teh sequel.