|Reviews for The HalfBlood Prince|
| Saint Snape chapter 20 . 3/11/2013
Ugh, why can't Lily's friends just leave it be? James doesn't need any help. He is puffed up enough to work on Lily on his own.
Nice to see Lily does recognize what all Severus has done for her. I just wish she would tell him. I wish he wouldn't give up too. :(
| trinculolo chapter 19 . 2/23/2013
Awesome chapter, as usual.
I love this chapter, its so interesting and different from what has happened in the previous chapter.
Congratulations Lucius and Narcissa! I love how the Dark Lord came in and silenced the room, i wonder where he got that ooccamy egg?
Not to mention, I like how Regulus starts the "Half-Blood Prince" rumor to help Severus get a girl.
It was also very interesting to see how Severus understood Narcissa's problem in a second. I hope she'll be alright.
| snickerdoodle10201 chapter 19 . 2/18/2013
Very intriguing chapter - particularly that hint at the end about the previous two months at Hogwarts being "surreal"... I'm hoping we'll find out more about that in the next installment! Nice change of POV also partway through the chapter it was very fluid. The society gossip helped contextualize the wedding and the Voldemort cameo was great for further developing Sev's status in that circle. Well done as always!
| Mari83 chapter 19 . 2/17/2013
Masterful chapter! I love how you zoom in from the description of Malfoy Manor, the chapel and family history (love all the rich details) to the figure of Severus as observed by others and finally his thoughts. It really bring out his aspirations and in-between position, on the one hand standing back and observing, uneasy with this society that doesn't really accept him, yet craving their approval, craving to be recognized – as Voldemort then does.
"An Occamy egg was a rare and beautiful thing, for apart from its symbolism, and the intrinsic value of the pure silver of its shell, it had magical properties derived from the exotic beast that produced it."
Love details like this.
'You were always a prankster, Hubert – but you didn't steal that basilisk-skin: our old Prefect, Tom, gave it to you.'
'Well I always assumed it was stolen. Tom always had a knack of ...uh ...finding these really weird things, but he couldn't have bought anything: the chap was an orphan! Brilliant, but no money and no real family connections. I wonder what happened to him?'
'Some say he was killed, others that he went abroad...I don't know. Anyway, I was telling you about my brother...'
So clueless and even if they knew they wouldn't (want to) believe.
'Exactly. Sirius didn't want to come to his cousin's wedding. That's what started it. Apparently, he heard Narcissa and her betrothed had invited the Dark Lord. I'm afraid my nephew's mind has been poisoned by the bloodtraitors and mudbloods he associates with.'
Nice way to tie in Sirius break with his family. Also love the bit about Alphard.
" along the wide, imposing flight of steps that led to the manor door, where old suits of armour worn by Malfoy ancestors and emblazoned with the family coat-of-arms, stood at attention, swords raised to salute the bride and groom."
That is just over the top. And perfectly fitting of their overblown sense of grandeur.
'Why are you complaining, Severus? The Half-Blood Prince is a title with just the right touch of transgressive mystique that makes witches go wild to know more...'
'And you think I'd appreciate that because...?'
'Oh, come on – these girls have a lot to recommend them... they're pureblood, attractive- '
'They're mostly old gossips with nothing better to do than perpetuate stupid rumours like yours...'
Very nice contrast of Regulus rich boy nonchalance and Severus serious tenseness..
"For some strange reason, Narcissa behaved differently towards him than she did towards others – even though he was a half-blood whose house would barely make the grade as a tool- shed on her new estates. Severus thought he'd seen a silent plea in Narcissa's eyes. He didn't know what to make of that, and he could not do or say anything to reassure her. "
Love all the undercurrents and expectations under the shiny surface, the reproductive pressure on Narcissa and her silent communication with Severus.
| ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
Great chapter! What month does this take place in though? Is it now the summer after their sixth year?
| Saint Snape chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
Poor Severus, this was just a reminder of what he can't have with Lily. Narcissa was smart to befriend Severus. If anyone can help her he can.
| DuchessofSomar chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
my heart breaks for severus every time i read a new chapter. and the description you wrote for the occamy egg was AMAZING. makes me wish i could see something like what you illustrated with words in real life. haha sure sounds expensive XD
| Reyem chapter 19 . 2/16/2013
What a wonderful chapter. I love how you tied in the people that we only recognized by name. I am always amazed at the intricate design and writing of characters that really haven't had a major place in JK's plot line. You make them so realistic.
| Arazadia chapter 19 . 2/15/2013
Such a haunting, beautiful chapter! I have to say, I find the relationship between Severus and Narcissa endlessly compelling and fascinating. They have unimaginably different upbringings, skills, and roles but there is an odd understanding between them and some shared sense of identity. I hope we keep seeing them interact.
| Osced chapter 19 . 2/15/2013
Interesting chapter, it really developed the idea of Severus being important, with Voldermort acknowledging him and that he was invited to the wedding. I like how you got the story of Sirius running away into this chapter without making it out of place. It's still obvious how much Severus loves Lily, but now he really knows it will never happens something between them. Only missed learning about what Lily is doing in the summer.
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/1/2013
NOOOOO SO SAD! :( :( Great chapter, even though I'm crying now
| Mari83 chapter 18 . 1/29/2013
Yet another painful parting. We'll see how long it will last this time – you have them drifting apart but also keeping drifting back to each other. I'm glad that at least everything is out in the open now and they had a conversation not based on hidden plans and emotions.
'Where's your Prefect?' he barked at the little ones.
'She's not our Prefect,' piped up one little boy with a shock of carrot-red hair, 'We're Ravenclaws!'
'I don't care if you're Cornish Pixies!' Severus growled 'Where is she?'
Ah, future Professor Snape emerging.
| DuchessofSomar chapter 18 . 1/23/2013
sev my poor babby *clutches my pained heart* i feel so bad for him. he loves her and he just cant seem to say the right thing. (though lily isnt helping either really)
| GingerGal chapter 18 . 1/19/2013
The complete realization of these two characters is inspiring and absolutely wonderful.
It is such a gift to read these pieces.
| Alcoremortis chapter 18 . 1/20/2013
Oh damn! I know I say this every time, but it bears repeating: fantastic chapter. I loved all the back and forth between Lily and Severus, seeing them drift closer together, then further apart... and then Potter ruining everything in the end even though he's not there. I feel like this chapter just by itself almost defines their relationship through this entire story. Or rather, lays everything out right here.
And when Severus was the one to leave this time... that was a kick right in feelings. And it was beautiful. I didn't think it would be possible for him to hate Potter more... but I'm guessing next time they meet, it's not going to be pretty at all. Or even less pretty than it already is.