|Reviews for Embodiment of the Curse of Hatred and Will of Fire|
| naruto44namikaze chapter 1 . 1/22
| Monster King chapter 3 . 9/2/2017
Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes please continue.
| CodyJaaxs chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
This is definitely an interesting concept for a story, I wish I had at least gotten to read the original, and I hope to be able to read more of this with hopefully future updates! Here's to you having luck with no writers block!
| ivanganev1992 chapter 3 . 7/24/2017
Ch 3 That is just the beginning!Update please.
| wbdionisio chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
| Kutsuu Mugen chapter 2 . 6/24/2017
Okay, while I like this story so far, I had to stop in the first little bit of the prologue to address an issue. In the paragraph of the prologue talking about the Hiraishin, you used the word omniscient in reference to the technique.
This makes no sense, as omniscient means all-knowing. And Hiraishin has nothing to do with knowledge (beyond creating the technique and the user's fuuin shiki). That word should be omnipotent, meaning all-powerful.
Hope this helps.
| vizer17 chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
This is a great naruto fic I really hope you don't cancel it. It has potential in my opinion you can do great things with it I know you can because your other three are ten out of ten amazing so far.
| RatherFabulous chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
One question...what the heck does "indented purposes" mean? Intents and purposes, I get, but I've never seen 'em indented before... unless it's in a paragraph, of course. ;
| SpencerDorman chapter 3 . 3/2/2017
I'm assuming that Naruto will eventually awaken his Sharingan, even if his Uchiha blood is faint and his father and his grandmother didn't do so. However, regardless of whether he ever awakens the Sharingan or not, Naruto should certainly eventually awaken the Rinnegan. Being the great-great-grandson of Madara Uchiha, the previous reincarnation of Indra Ōtsutsuki, and being the great-grandson of Hashirama Senju, the previous reincarnation of Ashura Ōtsutsuki, as well as being the current reincarnation of Ashura, Naruto has the requirements for the awakening of the Rinnegan more than fulfilled. Since such a feat requires either the chakra of Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki or the combined chakra of both Indra and Ashura, of which the latter requirement can be fulfilled by their reincarnations taking their place, the chakra running through Naruto's body completes this requirement. However, since Madara, and thus Indra's chakra has been diluted enough throughout the generations, Naruto will not be awakening the Rinnegan anytime soon, similar to how it took a long time before Madara's own Rinnegan awakened from the infusion of Hashirama's cells into his own body. Not on such a large time scale, but he certainly shouldn't be awakening it in the first decade of his life, so similar nonetheless.
I didn't exactly review your "A Flash of Steel" story, because I couldn't really think of anything to write in one, but rest assured that I loved it. The same goes for this story, I loved it, and I can't wait for either one to be updated.
| FanFicFanatic88 chapter 3 . 2/14/2017
your gonna update this right? please please please?! this is way to awesome to let die, please give us more of this!
| my 2 guys chapter 3 . 1/30/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
| shade the hegdehog chapter 3 . 1/25/2017
God jirayia your such a riot
| Reader ZJ chapter 3 . 11/10/2016
Please please please updated soon and continue writing this story
| DenizenOfApocrypha chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
I would love to see a continuation of this. its a very good concept. I understand if you have lost the story.
| Killjoy3000 chapter 3 . 11/4/2016