Reviews for Hearts Out On The Open Road
indigo.lizzy chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
awwww so sweet. :) I can't really relate much since I don't have a dad, and I'm not a boy. XD But I can appreciate a good character study when it's staring me in the face. haha very nice. :D
fullmetal53 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I enjoyed your take on this moment. It was a lot more somber than I expected (pleasantly surprised), and every parenthetical statement plays (at least in my head) as an echo of a flash back from things like goof troop. I would say that I wish it was longer, but you were covering one scene, so you don't want to go overboard. So all in all, enjoyable, yet emotionally rousing, read.
Powerhouse73 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
This was a good one shot its been a couple weeks since i read one but this was good keep up the good work...