|Reviews for vindicated|
| The-Alizarin-Possum534 chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
I like where this is going. There are nly two things you need to improve on. One is the characters' personalities. You've unknowningly changed them. Tsume and Kiba should both be more silent. The other is the grammar. Althoug you've improved heaps in chapter 3, there are still some things to tweak.
Im excited! :D
| Anonymous Mousse chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
Umm, how about paragraphs? You know, ones to separate dialogue? Oooo! How about punctuation? Or spelling? Capital letters? Yes, that would be nice. I love correct spelling...:)