Reviews for Storm
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
CUTE.
Princess Sammi chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Wow that was beautiful hun. So very different and yet so incredibly good. The language flowed so melodious and the whole thing was just incredible.

{ Wondering how you are, where you are and who you are with,
If you are happy...
Or if you remember me.}

Awww :(

{The daffodils that grow every spring will remind me of how they were
Thrice perched upon your table. The sweet scene will transcend me
Into snares of nostalgia.}

Love that part :)

Princess S

XxX
DissectingPomegranates chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Ah ha! The queen of poetry is BACK! :)

Great to see another piece from you and hope your projects at school aren't stressing you out too much!

Very good fic, very different as well, you know exploring the big question...why is HB so bitter against her male counterparts!

Mega Awwww at this line:

Wondering how you are,

where you are and who you are with,

If you are happy...

Or if you remember me.

Cue the tissues :'(

LV x
NCD Via Mob chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Aaaaah, our resident poetry mistress has been at it again, I see. Well, you want opinions, here's mine: it was and is excellent. The capture of Constance's mind and thought process with your language use was very well composed; it was also different to poems I have read from you before, and I'm not sure if it was deliberate or not to have the flow slightly disjointed by where you stopped the lines to continue to the next line of prose; regardless, the quality of your work cannot be denied and, again, as I so often state to those who are younger than I, it IS impressive for your relative age and world education thus far. Obviously, one's understanding of life events varies between those who have led happy-go-lucky lives - and those who have not and thus write about them in some way. Your trait of darkness in poetry is equalled and indeed reflected with the same superb execution as your light, hilarious tales - this, I think, marks you as a true author, because you can draw the reader into any context of your choice with the same appeal, without one weighing heavier than the other. Bravo to you, hun. Bravo! NCD XxXxX PS: Good luck again with the projects - you'll rock them, chick! X
Chrissiemusa chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Well done on this poem, excellent. I can't write poetry at all, always ends up sounding too clique and just bad but this was great. My favourite lines would have to be:

I can predict the future.

I know that I will be looking out of the window, next to my bed,

Looking through the ferocious wind and rain,

Wondering how you are, where you are and who you are with,

If you are happy...

Or if you remember me.

Just beautiful imagery and I could see Constance reflecting on the past through her window like that, wondering what may have been. Well done and good luck with your assessment though I'm sure you will be fine :)