Reviews for Walmart Win
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
That was really sexy. Loved the prompt and what you did with it. From the foot rub to the multiples. She deserved getting taken care of. Loved the ending of it as well . . . with promises of a future together.
Christy
Kickinl8tr chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Love those kinds of promises;). I can tell u tho. We Do Not have sexy Wally World shoppers in my neck of the woods. Lmao.
GreyEyedGirl159 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I liked it. I would really like to come across a guy like that Edward next time I'm in super.
Dil9 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Fun:)
biblepam chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
cute, hot little story... thanks for sharing and posting.
CrisLovesU chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Sequel?
Jasper's Woman chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Really enjoyed this...cute and sexy...well done
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Stumbled accross this will ne searching for Edward in front me in the Que next time I shop
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
fab story what a way to end shopping
heygirl18 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
LOVED IT!

I hope it helped with your writer's block :)
darkinque chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Loved this one-shot, will there possibly be more of these two? I would love to read it if you continue it.
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
This is so great! I wouldn't mind picking Edward up at Walmart. lol
feja chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Damn fine and so hot! Loved it
Teresa R chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
That was hot as hell Ive never seen anything so good at wal mart lol
tawelephant chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Woo hoo. Loved it!
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